Chaos: Okay everyone, this is my first shot at a Kaikan Phrase poem and I'm pretty pleased with how it came out! As I say in all my other fics, compliments and constructive criticism are always welcome, but narrow-minded flamers will be laughed at and deleted. So without further a due I give you all my poem!
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You
When I'm not in your arms baby, I feel lost
Feel like I've fallen so far below
Been kicked down and abused
Forced to give up my dreams
But being back with you, gives me a high no drug could match
Your love is the only thing that keeps me going
The only thing that gives me strength
Your sweet whispered 'I love you's' are the reason I live on
I wake every morning hoping you're still at my side
Praying that you haven't abandoned me like others before have
Leaving me lost without you, drowning in my own sorrow
Never to be found again
My heart throbs at the sight of you
My hands long for the touch of your soft skin
My body trembles when you're near me
And aches when I can't touch you
I hope you feel the same
I pray you need me as badly as I need you
I love you Aine
I just hope that you know that and believe it with all you heart
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Chaos: Not the greatest, but you know. Review and I'll be your friend… well I won't really, but you'll just make my day!