This is my first story ever, so help me with advice and not to mean.

During Ronny on empty.

"Thoughts"

With Ronny

Ronny was feeling weaker and weaker. The machine was draining her quickly.

"Come on Mack get here soon." Ronny thought.

With the other rangers

"Come on we need to get Ronny out of the hands of the fear cats." Mack thought while he and the other rangers were trying to find Ronny. They finally decided to split up thinking it would make the search easier. Dax and Rose went on a trial going north. Will went to the west. Tyzon went to the south, and Mack went to the east. They decided to met up after an hour.

With Dax and Rose

They walked for a couple of minutes before they were attacked but the lava lizards. They fought without needing to morph. After defeating the lava lizards they decided to keep looking while going north.

With Will

Will walked and walked until he heard a noise a little farther into the woods. He hid behind a tree and listened to the fearcats talk.

"Well the girl is almost drained, meaning we can get the robot working quicker and we can defeat the power rangers."

With Tyzon

Tyzon walked in the forest and not much longer was he attacked. But without needing to morph the quicker the fight was.

With Mack

Mack walked in the wood till he saw a bunch of rocks. He heard a noise so he hid behind a rock. He saw lots of lava lizards and their larder flowing behind emerge from a rock. After watching them leave he went into the rock and fond the layer of the fearcats. Mack saw Ronny holding onto a yellow glowing egg. He ran over to Ronny and tried to pull her hands off the egg but the hold was too strong.

"Ronny hold on," Mack said as he ran over to the machine that was keeping the egg running to drain Ronny of her power. As Mack deactivated the machine Ronny fell to the floor. Mack ran over to her.

"Ronny!" Mack said as he ran over to her. He helped her sit up.

"Are you okay?" He asked.

"Yea but lets get out of here," Ronny answered.

Mack was helping Ronny stand up. Walking back to where they agreed to meet Mack said "Ronny I'm really glad your okay."

Ronny stopped making Mack stop too. Ronny turned her face toward Mack and gave him a kiss on the cheek.

"Thank you for saving me," Ronny said.

Mack turned and kissed Ronny passionately.

"What was that for," Ronny asked.

"That was because I love you and I'm glad nothing happened to you," Mack answered.

"I love you too," Ronny replied.

And they walked back to where they were suppose to meat hand in hand.

Okay please review!!! This is my first story ever. So please be easy!!