:/A.N: Hey, all! Elli here! This was a song I wrote awhile ago and only just got the guts to post it today. I'm not claiming to be the next Kurt Cobain of songwriting, but I just thought that if I'd collect other people's song, I should post my own as well. I hope that you enjoy it, and if you do, please review. Gah! Stupid rhyming. Anyways, I'll shut up now and get on with the show!:/


Now you've got that harpy,

That shrew.

What makes you think;

I'll still love you?

I gave you my heart,

I gave you my all,

But you still just let me fall.

You took my heart and made me surrender.

You took my love and made me a pretender.

Honey, it's not O.K.

Why'd you have to leave me this way?

Now there's only darkness.

No more, no less.

I feel nothing anymore.

You left me emotionally poor.

Well, I hope you're happy.

You turned me into a goddamn zombie.

You took my heart and made me surrender.

You took my love and made me a pretender.

Honey, it's not O.K.

Why'd you have to leave me this way?

When you came back;

When you came back.

My mind.

My heart.

Both started to crack.

You charged back.

Into my life.

And expected,

Me to forgive you.

Well, news flash;

You took my heart and made me surrender.

You took my love and made me a pretender.

Honey, it's not O.K.

Why'd you have to leave me this way?

Now you've got that harpy,

That shrew.

What makes you think;

I'll still love you?

I gave you my heart,

I gave you my all,

But you still just let me fall.

You took my heart and made me surrender.

You took my love and made me a pretender.

Honey, it's not O.K.

Why'd you have to leave me this way?

When I moved on.

You came back.

And expected,

Me to forgive you.

Why should I?

When you left,

I could only cry.

You took my heart and made me surrender.

You took my love and made me a pretender.

Honey, it's not O.K.

Why'd you have to leave me this way?

I just can't cope.

Anymore.

I might as well.

Die on the floor.

I'd welcome death now.

So I wouldn't have to see you with that cow.

Now you've got that harpy,

That shrew.

What makes you think;

I'll still love you?

I gave you my heart,

I gave you my all,

But you still just let me fall.

You took my heart and made me surrender.

You took my love and made me a pretender.

Honey, it's not O.K.

Why'd you have to leave me this way?

Now you've got that harpy,

That shrew.

What makes you think;

I'll still love you?

I gave you my heart,

I gave you my all,

But you still just let me fall.

Now you've got that harpy,

That shrew.

What makes you think;

I'll still love you?

I gave you my heart,

I gave you my all,

But you still just let me fall.

If it makes you happy,

What about me?

If it makes you happy,

What about me?


:/And that concludes Mahinaluatupui! If you have anything to say, be it positive comments, constructive criticism or just plain flames, let me know in a review.

I hope you enjoyed Mahinaluatupui, and if not, I apologize for stealing your life from you./: