:/A.N: Hey, all! Elli here! This was a song I wrote awhile ago and only just got the guts to post it today. I'm not claiming to be the next Kurt Cobain of songwriting, but I just thought that if I'd collect other people's song, I should post my own as well. I hope that you enjoy it, and if you do, please review. Gah! Stupid rhyming. Anyways, I'll shut up now and get on with the show!:/
Now you've got that harpy,
That shrew.
What makes you think;
I'll still love you?
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my all,
But you still just let me fall.
You took my heart and made me surrender.
You took my love and made me a pretender.
Honey, it's not O.K.
Why'd you have to leave me this way?
Now there's only darkness.
No more, no less.
I feel nothing anymore.
You left me emotionally poor.
Well, I hope you're happy.
You turned me into a goddamn zombie.
You took my heart and made me surrender.
You took my love and made me a pretender.
Honey, it's not O.K.
Why'd you have to leave me this way?
When you came back;
When you came back.
My mind.
My heart.
Both started to crack.
You charged back.
Into my life.
And expected,
Me to forgive you.
Well, news flash;
You took my heart and made me surrender.
You took my love and made me a pretender.
Honey, it's not O.K.
Why'd you have to leave me this way?
Now you've got that harpy,
That shrew.
What makes you think;
I'll still love you?
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my all,
But you still just let me fall.
You took my heart and made me surrender.
You took my love and made me a pretender.
Honey, it's not O.K.
Why'd you have to leave me this way?
When I moved on.
You came back.
And expected,
Me to forgive you.
Why should I?
When you left,
I could only cry.
You took my heart and made me surrender.
You took my love and made me a pretender.
Honey, it's not O.K.
Why'd you have to leave me this way?
I just can't cope.
Anymore.
I might as well.
Die on the floor.
I'd welcome death now.
So I wouldn't have to see you with that cow.
Now you've got that harpy,
That shrew.
What makes you think;
I'll still love you?
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my all,
But you still just let me fall.
You took my heart and made me surrender.
You took my love and made me a pretender.
Honey, it's not O.K.
Why'd you have to leave me this way?
Now you've got that harpy,
That shrew.
What makes you think;
I'll still love you?
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my all,
But you still just let me fall.
Now you've got that harpy,
That shrew.
What makes you think;
I'll still love you?
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my all,
But you still just let me fall.
If it makes you happy,
What about me?
If it makes you happy,
What about me?
:/And that concludes Mahinaluatupui! If you have anything to say, be it positive comments, constructive criticism or just plain flames, let me know in a review.
I hope you enjoyed Mahinaluatupui, and if not, I apologize for stealing your life from you./:
