Angel: Sure
Autumn (not my name but I like it): Angel, can u do.. omg cool!
Angel: Autumn doesn't own any of the MR characters, JP does.
Angel: your welcome!
Me: Thank.. Classic Angel!
Chapter 1
I just got back to camp from my evening flight to see everyone in the corner of the cave. As I landed everyone looked up at me. They looked sad, but none of them would look me in the eye.
"What's wrong you guys?"
"Max, we, um, we think that you're not fit to be leader anymore. You keep flying off alone, and when you do we keep getting attacked by erasers. We want you to leave the flock." Angel said as she walked up to me.
I started at her, too dumbfounded to speak. "Is that what you all think?" Everyone was avoiding my eye. "Fang? Do you want me to leave?" He didn't say a word and just looked at the wall with everyone else. "Fine! I'll leave, but I'm going to say one thing: I never want to see any of you ever again."
Now I was on the verge of tears. I turned around, not wanting them to see me cry, and jumped out of the cave. I spread my 15 foot wings, flew 3oo miles per hour, and landed about 50 miles away. I landed and finally realized what had just happened. I started to cry, yelling into the sky. My flock, the flock I had cared for for so long, had kicked me out. Me, their leader! They were going to pay. How could they do this to me? I was their leader. I had loved and cared for them my whole life. I started to cry again when I heard a twig snap.
"Aw, did little Maxie lose her flock?" I turned around. Crap. I had let my emotions get to me. While I had been crying I had been surrounded by erasers.
"For your information, they lost me." She said sadly. It was 1 against 10, but I wasn't going down without a fight.
Later
I fought good, but not good enough. Right now an eraser had me pinned against the ground.
"Please, kill me. I'm done living." As I said it I knew that's how I really felt. I looked him in the eye, and closed mine, waiting for the final blow to come.
"O Max, I won't kill you, but I might kill your flock. How would you feel about that?" He smiled down. I smiled back. Go ahead. Help yourself. Those bastards deserved it I thought.
"But if you crave blood that much then just kill me."
"O Max, I would never kill you." And with that he smashed my head on the ground knocking me unconscious.
Fangs POV
After Max left Angel gathered us all together, saying that she had something to tell us.
"Guys, I don't think Max is fit to be leader anymore." She looked at each of us as she said it. It took me a moment to digest what she had just said.
"What? How can you even say that?"
She looked me in the eye and said "Fang, I know you love Max, but she's going flying alone w
ay too often, and we're always attacked by erasers when she goes out. I think she should leave."
"Angel, how could you do that to Max? She cared for you and loved you!"
"Sacrifices have to be made for the good of the flock." She told me with cold eyes.
"I'm taking a vote. If you don't raise your hand for anything than you wont be counted. All in favor of kicking Max out?"
Everyone but me raised their hand.
"Fang, think about it. The erasers are only after her. With Max gone, the erasers will leave us alone."
I don't know why I did it but finally I raised my hand.
"So it's settled. We kick Max out of the flock.
Just then we heard Max coming. I couldn't stand the thought so I looked at the wall. She asked what was wrong and Angel walked up. She basically told Max that we were done with there. She looked at us and opened her mouth, like she was about to say something, and closed it again. She looked directly at me.
"Fang, do you want me to leave?" I heard the sadness in her voice and decided to look away. She looked at us all one more time and said "Fine! I'll leave, but I'm going to say one thing: I never want to see any of you ever again." She jumped out of the mouth of the cave.
I punched the wall. "Why did we do that? Fang, we'll all be safe now. With Max gone, erasers won't come searching for us anymore.
"Sorry birdies, but you're sadly mistaken." We all turned around to see erasers at the front of the cave. "What are you talking about?" I asked
"Well, I just ran into none other than Mrs. Ride herself. She asked me to kill her. Saying she didn't want to live anymore. Whatever you did to her must have hurt. Bad. I told her no, that I wouldn't kill her, but she did say I could kill you." He smiled, looking at each of us.
"You're lying. Max would never say that."
"O, but she did, and what kind of person would I be if I didn't grant that one wish?"
And then he attacked. He had about 10 other erasers with him, but we were no match without Max. Finally when I was the last one standing he pinned me to the ground. He came right up to my face and snarled, "Listen here pretty boy. I'd forget about her if I were you. I wasn't lying when I said she wanted you dead. If you know what's good for you you'll steer clear of her." He then took my head and smashed it against the rock of the cave and everything cave went black.
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