I did this once already but some people didn't like it so I fixed it up a bit
"I rolled over in bed to see the blinds to my window open and saw the snow falling and the bright New York sun shining through. I groaned and looked at the clock and saw the date, December 25. I quickly got up and ran to my mom and dad's room. I had screamed bloody murder at the sight of my parent's bed room..."
Her name is Natalia and this is her Christmas story and why it was the worst ever.
There was blood all over the walls and in the bed were her parents bodies, the bed was soaked in their blood, clumps of hair were on the floor, and photos and other items were thrown on the floor. Her mom's neck was sliced open and her eyes were wide open, her dads face was wrapped in plastic wrap and both their hands and legs were bound together by fishing wire.
*1 hour later*
Natalia was in the living room, police officers and paramedics were all over the house going in and out the front door, there was caution tape separating neighbors from the crime scene. She looked over towards the Christmas tree; presents surrounding it, she looked above the tree and saw the framed photo of her, her mom, and her dad taken earlier this week. She closed her eyes letting a tear fall as the police officer sat in front of her and told Natalia her name and her partners name. "I'm detective Olivia Benson and this is my partner Nick Amaro." Natalia didn't look up; she didn't want to, so without looking up she said, "I don't know what happened. I woke up so excited because it was Christmas... I went to get my mom and dad..." Natalia broke down and started crying and she couldn't stop. Olivia looked up at Nick then went and sat down next to Natalia and put an arm around her to comfort her, but Natalia pulled away and screamed, "No! Stop... please don't touch me.." Everybody looked at Natalia and Olivia then looked at Nick then to Natalia. "I'm sorry... I-I..." Natalia said looking down wrapping her arms around herself as more tears came.
Olivia just looked at Natalia and said, "Are you okay?"
"I-I'm fine..."
"Do you have anyone else to stay with?" Nick asked
Natalia looked at Olivia for a second and Olivia saw fear in her eyes. Natalia looked down and shook her head "N-no... I don't..." Natalia rubbed her hand up and down on her shoulder still looking down.
"Are you sure? No aunt, uncle, grandparent? What about your father, your biological father?" Nick said
Natalia looked up at him quickly "who told you my mom remarried?"
"Your neighbor" Nick replied
Olivia looked at Natalia again and Natalia looked down "I can't stay with him."
"Why's that?" Olivia asked
"N-nothing... I just... I just don't want to live with him."
"Why don't you want to stay with your father?"
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I'll update later once i get some reviews. Please review, this is my first time, I'd like to know how I did, please and thank you, until next time!
