A little something that popped up while riding my bike and passing some ravens. It's my first attempt at the more 'formalized' style of writing, so constructive comments are welcome.

Raven's Crow

Mocking call
Harsh and low
Caw, caw
The raven's crow

Evil stirs
In feathers dark
Night is here
Demon's lark

Death is coming
Wings of black
Approaching swiftly
No going back

Echoes ring
In empty space
Gliding eb'ny
Silent grace

Scavenge bird
Supp on fear
Hear the pain
It's drawing near

Mocking call
Harsh and low
Caw, caw
The raven's crow