Chapter 1

It was twelve in the hot afternoon and Neo Piers, The most crowded theme park in Neopian ocean, was extremely packed today.

"Hurry up!" An impatient red bori yelled. Today was the opening of Monster Fury, the brand new roller coaster. Millie was very excited about it; she was already in the long line. A tired uni traveled along the path as fast as she could but it wasn't easy when everyone else was traveling on the same path.

"Sarah, come on!" Millie whined. The longer it took Sarah to get to the line, the longer the line got. She pushed her way through the crowd apologizing as she went. Sarah finally made it to the line. She ran over to Millie not noticing the other neopets who were already in line.

"Whew;" She said "finally made it."

"Hey! We was here first!" An angry Grarrl exclaimed.

"Yeah, get to the back of the line!" An equally angered Zafara added. Millie let out a frustrated sigh and moved to the back of the line. Sarah followed her.

"You didn't have to move to the back with me." Sarah said.

"Yeah, well knowing how much of a chicken you are I figured you wouldn't want to go alone." Millie replied.

"I'm not a chicken!" Sarah said. Millie just smiled. So they waited and waited. It seemed like hours passed and the line was still long. They waited and waited and waited some more. The fans blew water mist in the line to make it cooler but it only worked for as long as you were in range. Millie was getting very impatient. The boredom of waiting made Sarah want to go to sleep but the scorching heat prevented her.

Finally they were at the loading station. But someone was holding up the line. An Ogin was crying because his big brother was trying to force him to get on the ride.

"I don't wanna! I don't wanna! I don't wanna!" The little Ogin scremed.

"Aw come on! You're not going to get hurt," The brother replied "It's just a ride!" He tried to pull the little Orgin on but he wouldn't budge. This went on for a while before a ride employee interrupted.

The ride assistant held a ruler "Well he isn't tall enough to ride anyway so…"

"Ok then." The big brother said sadly. They headed towards the exit. Some neopets cheered that ride could start now. Millie and Sarah could finally ride. Millie got in the front car and Sarah followed. The ride assistant made sure everyone was safely in their cars. When everyone was ready the train set off. It traveled very slowly up the lifthill. After a while Sarah looked down to see how high they were. The sight of the ocean made her very nervous and the whole ride was over the sea. They were now at the top. Sarah and Millie were the first to see the steep drop.

Millie raised her paws in the air and yelled, "Whooooooooo hooooo!" Sarah couldn't say anything. Everyone screamed. The Roller coaster ran down the track, went trough three corkscrews and a brake to slow it down a little, made a sharp turn, went uphill then back down trough 2 loops, another turn with more corkscrews and then it went back to the station. But it didn't stop when everyone thought it would, instead it kept on going. The ride operator pushed the emergency off button but nothing happened. When he looked at the monitors, big red letters flashed across the screen.

"Oh No," The ride operator tried to say calmly "the brakes are out!" The neopets in line panicked. Then the ride assistant stepped in.

"Ok everyone the ride is now closed. Please, to avoid trampling leave trough the exit to your right." He spoke normally as if everything was in control and a rollercoaster train was not about to fly off the track. Everyone gasped when they saw it. The train zoomed trough the corkscrews and nothing slowed it down after that so it flew off the track and over the ocean taking its screaming passengers with it.