Author's Note
Ok so I knew this was going to become the longest Author's Note I'd ever written and I thought that it would be better to put it as a beginning rather than putting it at the top of chapter one, because then people may not read it all (a crime I myself am guilty of), and it's important that this is read.
I originally wrote this as Noughts and Crosses: A Happy Ending, and to be frank it was rubbish. Just rubbish. I'm woman enough to admit that I know it was rubbish. Well I wasn't at first, it took a brutally honest review from The Jade Falcon for me to realise how bad it was. But then shanice2712 wrote a review asking me to write more to Noughts and Crosses: A Happy Ending, and I said I probably would, and then I thought about it. I wasn't willing to write more to a story that I knew wasn't at all well written.
So this is me taking note of what The Jade Falcon said about Noughts and Crosses: A Happy Ending and editing it, lengthening it, and making it (hopefully) a million times better!
Originally The Jade Falcon was originally working as a beta reader for me for this story, but I only used that for the first 3 chapters, because I find it easier just to write, edit through myself and upload!
Most of you probably aren't interested in what's changed from the original, but I'm going to tell you anyway! Ha! Sorry to those of you I bore out of your skin. Anyway, originally I had Kamal Hadley call off the execution, and The Jade Falcon pointed out how completely…how'd they put it…'your characterisation of Kamal was dreadful.' which couldn't have been more true if it tried to be. Kamal would never try to save Callum, so I changed it. I think that's about the only thing I've changed from the origin. No Kamal! Who wants him around anyway
If you're reading this and you haven't read Noughts and Crosses: A Happy Ending, do yourself a favour and don't read it. Just read this (please!)
Please Read and Review!
Thankz a bunch
*hands virtual cookies to everyone reading*
~Josie (LynetteMcGregor)
Ps..Have you all read Double Cross? If you haven't why in the world not? Get reading (after you've read this if you don't mind *innocent smile*) it's brilliant!!
Pps...if you come to read this after the 26th chapter was uploaded you may see there was some reviews from Gabzrulz about the dreadful grammer/spelling, and be wondering why this is because there arent any grammer or spelling problems. This is because I made Gabby my beta-reader for all Noughts and Crosses stories I write, after she left those reviews (she was nice about it btw, not mean!)...and through this I made her beta-read all the chapters that had already been uploaded and I replaced them with the mistake-less ones! woo! Go Gabby :P
