The story behind the commentary
Chapter One
A boy of about 11 walked through the wall in between platform nine and ten. He looked around and saw his mom and dad emerging just as he did, and he saw two identical boys, both looking nervous like him, but they were surrounded by a crowed of other people, also with flaming red hair. His pen pals! He was going to meet them to get his school books in diagon alley, but they couldn't make it. He ran up to them and asked if they were Fred and George Weasly, and they said yes. They then introduced him to there mom, and there brothers, Charlie, Percy, and Ron, who was not yet at Hogwarts. He also had a sister, who looked about six or seven. They seemed to have realized who he was, his owl was screeching and would be very hard not to notice, plus the fact that it was a bright colour of purple. But before they could start any conversations the whistle was blown, and he said good-bye to his parents and boarded the train after the Weasly brothers. As soon as they found an empty compartment, George opened up a bag containing a small, wormlike critter that looked like a red glow stick with eyes that looked like it just had a container of liquid nitrogen poured over it. It was steaming. Fred picked it up and all Lee could was was stare at it in amassment. "Ginny" Whispered Fred and George burst out laughing. The Thing had just grown long, straight red hair, looking remarkably like there little sister. "Give me a try!" He looked at it and muttered "Mum". It grew short, green hair and a very stern expression. "It randomly picks a date and the Cappergus does an impression of whatever person you say., On that date." explained George. "Oh! And that is last September when Stan taught me how to turn things different colours!" "So that is why Errol kept getting pink whenever he delivered a letter to you!" exclaimed Fred, he looked happy to hear that his family's not-so-new-but-still-useful owl did not have some unknown disease. Finally, after a few rounds of exploding snap, the old witch came by pushing a cart. Fred and George had sandwiches, but he got them each two caldron cakes, plus a huge bag of chocolate frogs to share. When they got off the train they had eaten so much junk they thought they were going to be sick, and the boat rid did not add to the experience nicely, but they survied. They got out and went into the castle, lead by a woman that Hagrid, who took them across the lake called Profesor McGonnagle. They went into the great hall where there were five tables. He could tell that the one in the back was the staff table. He also saw a stool in the middle of the room with a hat on it. Fred said: "You have to try that on." "Oh." replied Lee. It than, to tremendus applas, broke into song. When it finished, Proffesor McGonnagle started calling names, starting with Adveraty, Cassie (RAVENCLAW!) When it got to Lee, He herd a vioce inside his head. "Well, Definetly not Ravenclaw, you are more a jokester then a scholer, not Slitheren-Better be GRYFFINDOR!"
