The Girl in the grey dress

This is set in between the two series Jack's not in the first few chapters.Please review I woul like to thank Abcarter, Flowerfairy30 and lil sakura haruno for their reviews. I am re writing this story because several people have told me they like it but it needs a clean up.

5267 Time Agency HQ Arizona desert.

"You need to find your brother" Matthew Keloy high general told the cadet. The girl brushed her long brown hair out of her blue eyes and looked at him."My brother is dead".She wore a silvery grey Victorian tavern girls dress and a blue saphire and gold locket.

"Not so,we located him in nineteenth century Cardiff. You know about the time and space rift. It's tearing a hole in the universe. More than that it's tearing holes in the other world the space between the dead and living. Corpses are beginning to get up and walk. They'll be able to kill the living they have no mind only bloodlust. Not here ,not yet it's starting in 21st century Cardiff. You need to find your brother we believe he's the only one who can stop it. He's the best we've ever had but he's deserted we need you to persuade him to come back we need him. More than anything."
The girl nodded and took the key it was a simple looking pure silver key on a gold chain. She put it round her neck. The high general looked sad. Maria if you cannot persuade your brother to help you must do this. This key requires the energy of human sacrifice. Whoever uses it will die. Can you do that can you persuade your brother to kill himself and if not can you plunge a knife into your own heart?"
"Yes"
The girl pressed a button on the teleporter on her wrist and dissapeared. Matthew Keloy stared sadly at the place were the girl had been standing moments before. He could tell from the look the girl had given him that even if her brother closed the rift she would not come back he'd just sent a fifteen year old girl to her death.
Sadly the high general wrote on a piece of paper 'deceased Maria Donatella Harkness.'

2008 Cardiff
Toshiko was cleaning out Jacks desk she felt like she was doing something illegal. She was searching for clues to were he might be.She'd wanted to look through it for ages but hadn't been able to open it. Then they had fought a race of technologically advanced raieds a type of alien who mixed biology with technology to create soldiers out of the races on planets they conquered. Torchwood had stored a lazer like gun theat opened any lock in it's vaults when everyone had gone home Tosh had taken it and used it on Jacks desk and to her delight it opened. She was getting frustrated all the first draw contained was a couple of guns with bullets. The second and third draws were all run of the mill paperwork. With low hopes Toshiko opened the last draw. There were two things in it both of which suprised Tosh. A saphire and gold locket and a photograph. The photograph was of Jack a twenty maybe twenty five year old Jack in a soldiers uniform with his arm round the neck of a twelwe yer old girl. The girl had brown hair and blue eyes just like Jacks. Tosh felt a eyes on her back and even though she knew the room was empty she turned around. There was a girl there she was maybe fifteen and wore a victorian style grey dress and wore the same style locket that was in Jacks draw but the think that scared Toshiko most was the fact that she was the girl from the photograph.
"Help me" the girl begged