I just wrote this before I was supposed to go to bed last night, when I was
supposed to be sleeping, so I have no idea if this is any good or not.
Lemme just say, I'm no poet, but, I kinda like this. Lemme know what you
think.
Sister Dear
My sister
How I miss you so
They say you're gone
They lie
It's all right though
For they don't know
You're truly here
You're here with me
I've not seen your face
Not for so long
Such a lovely sight
I miss it
Yet I hold it true
Sister dear
Do you miss me
As I do you
I no longer exist
It was always you
You and I are one
Inside and outside
I can recall
I recall so clearly
It's true
It's a vision
You're gone
You're truly not
I know
Sister dear
I know you're with me
I love you so
~To Kourin from Ryuuen
So, what did you think? Yay? Nay? ::shrugs:: Whatever. My first pretty decent looking something or other. What can you do to me anyway? Disown me? ::Laughs:: Review please.
Sister Dear
My sister
How I miss you so
They say you're gone
They lie
It's all right though
For they don't know
You're truly here
You're here with me
I've not seen your face
Not for so long
Such a lovely sight
I miss it
Yet I hold it true
Sister dear
Do you miss me
As I do you
I no longer exist
It was always you
You and I are one
Inside and outside
I can recall
I recall so clearly
It's true
It's a vision
You're gone
You're truly not
I know
Sister dear
I know you're with me
I love you so
~To Kourin from Ryuuen
So, what did you think? Yay? Nay? ::shrugs:: Whatever. My first pretty decent looking something or other. What can you do to me anyway? Disown me? ::Laughs:: Review please.
