Moonlight Melody
A Harry Potter FanFiction
By: Eternal Gate
Hi! I'm Eternal Gate, the author of this fanfiction. This is my very first Harry Potter fanfiction! So I don't worry about flamers. I know I don't sound like an American or an Australian. Oh, yeah and please notice that I don't write English rightly. 'Cause I'm not an American or an Australian. So now, enjoy reading it!
Note: -Don't forget to review!
-I don't own anything that has to do something with Harry Potter, only the books from the first book to the fourth one. And I really hope JK Rowling will finish Harry Potter&The Order Of Phoenix soon.
-If someone wants to say something in private, e-mail me at tabris@kitakita.com
-My English is TRULY, REALLY, SURELY, ABSOLUTELY, BAD. So, please be kind and tell me where I made mistakes. I really appreciate reviews!
-I don't have time for spell checking, so there will be a lot of mistakes in this fanfiction.
-Thanks for the first three reviews of my fanfic(Wing Of Ice)! Sorry to John-Kun. Thanks for the cheer up! to Gary Milburn. And Gomennasai! to Rhine, Thank you(100times)! Anyway thanks for the advice! I've got an editor now! Once again thank you for Rhine, the person who is really good at fanfiction writing!(I think so, cause you really know howto make one!)
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Chapter I
~A New Miracle~
It was Harry's fifth year at Hogwarts, he and his fellow Gryffindors has arrived at Hogsmeade Station. 'Firs' years o'er 'ere!' Hagrid shouted as usual, the students rode the boat to the castle and entered the Hogwarts Castle.
The students at Hogwarts has already taken their seats at the Great Hall, waiting for the Sorting Ceremony. At last, Professor McGonnagal came with the Sorting Hat on the three legged stool. The Sorting Hat sang the new song for this year, when it finished Professor McGonnagal came and unfolded a piece of parchment. 'When I call your name, please come to the front and put the Hat on your head.' She said in her usual voice.
'Brinkson, Amanda!'
'HUFFLEPUFF!'
'Lerionne, Christopher!'
'SLYTHERIN!'
'Harsonierre, Shoanne!'
'GRYFFINDOR!'(The Gryffindors stood up and clapped for her. Shoanne blushed deeply when she saw Harry clapping for her)
'Anderson, David!'
'HUFFLEPUFF!'
The other new students came ahead and put on the hat in turns. Until one of their names were said: 'Carollianne, Ellone!' The Sorting Hat paused for a few minutes and at last said, 'Gryffindor, year five!' Professor McGonnagal dropped the parchment in suprise, Fred and George which is drinking spitted the whole gulp. The staffs and Dumbledore himself sat there, dumbstrucked. 'Excuse me, are you sure?' Dumbledore said to the hat while standing up to have a clearer view.
'Of course! I'll eat myself if it doesn't fit her. I've never yet been wrong.' The hat said simply. Ellone stood there beside the hat and froze. She had dark brown eyes with black-dark and bright brown coloured hair. Her skin was very white. Harry didn't know if it was pale white or even cherry white. Her hair type was a little short at the front and gets long at the back. it was bobbed to the inside.
Professor Dumbledore stood there, thinking and at last said, 'Well, as the Sorting Hat had said now get to the Gryffindor Table.' with a warm smile. She simply nodded and left to the table. She sat beside Hermione and took something out of her cloak. She took a roll of parchment and also a quill and started writing something to it while the other first years is sorted. When she finished, she got off and went outside the Hall.
'What do you reckon' she's doing, Harry?' Ron said muffledly as he ate a piece of bacon. She came back and sat down. As Harry examined her, she was pretty and also very quiet. The whole school whispered to each other, Harry thought they were talking about her. And was curios how she got Sorted to the fifth year.
-----'~.~'-----
When the feast finally ended, the students walked to their dormitory. Their feet was the ones guiding them to the dormitory, with the Prefects in the front. The boys pulled on their pajamas and went to sleep. They found their luggage beside their beds, like usual. Harry couldn't sleep, he closed his eyes but was still thinking about the new girl, about half an hour later Harry fell asleep. He wasn't tired, but someone was singing. Very softly, his eyes beacme drowsy as he listened.
The next day, when the students were having breakfast, Harry, Ron and Hermione noticed that someone from Gryffindor was missing. 'Ellone's missing. D'you think she's okay, Ron?' Harry said. Ron shook his head and started eating the toasts. When they almost finished, Ellone came. 'Good Morning.' Hermione said, Ellone noticed this. She nodded, took a toast and left.
It was Charms first thing in the morning, the other Gryffindors had realised how good Ellone was about Charms, Potions, Transfiguration, Herbology, History of Magic and Arithmancy but not Divination and Care of Magical Creatures. A week had passed, Ellone was very good at lessons but the funny thing is...
'She doesn't have any friend.' Hermione said to Harry and Ron the next day.
'You're kidding, she's so good! How come she doesn't have friends?' Ron said.
'Well, I think Hermione's right. I haven't seen her with anyone else except with the teachers.' Harry responded.
'You guys! I've just heard from Lee! Ellone, that new girl, she got 10 points for Gryffindor from Professor Snape! It's a miracle!' George said, storming to them. Followed shortly by Fred, 'Yeah! And...One more thing about her. Lavender found this out. Ellone, that girl, she got another 5 points!' 'That's impossible!' 'No! We're not jokin'; she's really good!'
The three of them stared at each other when Parvati and Lavender came by, 'Hey, Guys! Fresh news! Ellone got a love letter!' 'A love letter?' Harry, Ron, and Hermione said together. 'Yeah!' 'From who?'
Lavender and Parvati stared at each other and giggled.
'-it's'Lavender began.
'-from'Parvati said
'-Malfoy.' the both of them said, and laughed histericaly.
Harry had an expression of disbelieve, and started laughing too. Followed by Ron and Hermione(she only laughed a little), they looked at Malfoy at the Slytherin table. He was blushing, deeply. Ellone came, took a piece of toast and left. 'What's the matter with her?' Ron said, starting on a toast. Harry and Hermione stared at each other and shook their heads. Ron paused, and started eating again.
When Transfiguration class began, the Gryffindors were studying with the Slytherins. When they were walking Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle, saw Ellone. When Malfoy's eyes met Ellone's, he blushed deeply and left her. She stopped,('Thinking about the love letter I think'Ron commented) looked up and walked off. Inside class, Ellone like always decided to sit alone at the front(I mean she didn't ask anyone to sit with her, no one wanted to). But, Malfoy was the one who sat WITH her on the same table. She just stared at the blushing Malfoy, but then decided to look and listen to Professor McGonnagal instead.
'Funny thing, since Ellone came here I've heard a song at night. Every night.It seemed like whoever who was singing it was also crying. The voice was a bit hoarse.' Ron said. Harry and Hermione looked at him, Ron realised this and asked, 'What?' 'I've been hearing it too!' Hermione and Harry answered in unite. 'Hey, I've heard it too!' a storming Lee said. 'Huh, you too?!' Fred and George answered together.
'It's not only you guys, the whole Gryffindor heard it!' Parvati said. For the next two days, the whole Gryffindor often babbled about it.(Except for Ellone, she just nodded when they asked her if she heard it.) Lots of them ended up having detentions from Professor Snape and also Filch, the caretaker. One day, Hermione told Harry that one of the girls in the Gryffindor dormitory saw a girl standing near the window. She was singing, when she finished she stared at the window and cry. The girl had to use glasses, but she didn't use it because she knew where the water jug was and she can pour it out without the glasses. According to the girl, this girl she saw was the person singing it. She saw this girl two times.
'YOU, LAVENDER and PARVATI are going to stay up all night to see who was singing it?' Ron said in suprise.
'What for, Hermione?' Harry added.
'WHAT FOR? Well, since ever I can't sudy at night! My eyes became drowsy when I heard it! That's why! And it's the same things for Parvati and Lavender!' She said, holding one of the "Guide to Transfiguration". Harry and Ron just stared at each other and pretended to eat when Ellone came, and like always, left with saying nothing.
-----'~.~'-----
Hemione, Parvati and Lavender are ready to see who was singing it. They stayed all night(Hermione told her parents to send them sachets of coffee) and pretended to be sleeping when studying. But was wide awake. Someone had opened the curtains of her(they knew it as it was in the girls dormitory) four-posters and walked silently to the window. Hermione closed her ears and saw her, the girl. The girl that never they thought would be the one. The one that is crying. She is...
To Be Continued...
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@UtH0r"s n0T3: Thanks for reading, please R&R!
Disclaimer:
-All the Harry Potter stuff is JK Rowlings.
-Ellone Carollianne is mine.
-And the "Guide To Transfiguration was a book a made my own.
Special Thanks :
-To the first three reviewers
-To AyanamiRei-Spell checking
-To Vivi Ortinia-For all the Ideas s/he gave me
Please be a VERY responsible reader and review my story, Please..........? I'll send an e-mail for the first three reviewer ! I promise ! ( if I know your e-mail address )
A Harry Potter FanFiction
By: Eternal Gate
Hi! I'm Eternal Gate, the author of this fanfiction. This is my very first Harry Potter fanfiction! So I don't worry about flamers. I know I don't sound like an American or an Australian. Oh, yeah and please notice that I don't write English rightly. 'Cause I'm not an American or an Australian. So now, enjoy reading it!
Note: -Don't forget to review!
-I don't own anything that has to do something with Harry Potter, only the books from the first book to the fourth one. And I really hope JK Rowling will finish Harry Potter&The Order Of Phoenix soon.
-If someone wants to say something in private, e-mail me at tabris@kitakita.com
-My English is TRULY, REALLY, SURELY, ABSOLUTELY, BAD. So, please be kind and tell me where I made mistakes. I really appreciate reviews!
-I don't have time for spell checking, so there will be a lot of mistakes in this fanfiction.
-Thanks for the first three reviews of my fanfic(Wing Of Ice)! Sorry to John-Kun. Thanks for the cheer up! to Gary Milburn. And Gomennasai! to Rhine, Thank you(100times)! Anyway thanks for the advice! I've got an editor now! Once again thank you for Rhine, the person who is really good at fanfiction writing!(I think so, cause you really know howto make one!)
=========================================================================================================================
Chapter I
~A New Miracle~
It was Harry's fifth year at Hogwarts, he and his fellow Gryffindors has arrived at Hogsmeade Station. 'Firs' years o'er 'ere!' Hagrid shouted as usual, the students rode the boat to the castle and entered the Hogwarts Castle.
The students at Hogwarts has already taken their seats at the Great Hall, waiting for the Sorting Ceremony. At last, Professor McGonnagal came with the Sorting Hat on the three legged stool. The Sorting Hat sang the new song for this year, when it finished Professor McGonnagal came and unfolded a piece of parchment. 'When I call your name, please come to the front and put the Hat on your head.' She said in her usual voice.
'Brinkson, Amanda!'
'HUFFLEPUFF!'
'Lerionne, Christopher!'
'SLYTHERIN!'
'Harsonierre, Shoanne!'
'GRYFFINDOR!'(The Gryffindors stood up and clapped for her. Shoanne blushed deeply when she saw Harry clapping for her)
'Anderson, David!'
'HUFFLEPUFF!'
The other new students came ahead and put on the hat in turns. Until one of their names were said: 'Carollianne, Ellone!' The Sorting Hat paused for a few minutes and at last said, 'Gryffindor, year five!' Professor McGonnagal dropped the parchment in suprise, Fred and George which is drinking spitted the whole gulp. The staffs and Dumbledore himself sat there, dumbstrucked. 'Excuse me, are you sure?' Dumbledore said to the hat while standing up to have a clearer view.
'Of course! I'll eat myself if it doesn't fit her. I've never yet been wrong.' The hat said simply. Ellone stood there beside the hat and froze. She had dark brown eyes with black-dark and bright brown coloured hair. Her skin was very white. Harry didn't know if it was pale white or even cherry white. Her hair type was a little short at the front and gets long at the back. it was bobbed to the inside.
Professor Dumbledore stood there, thinking and at last said, 'Well, as the Sorting Hat had said now get to the Gryffindor Table.' with a warm smile. She simply nodded and left to the table. She sat beside Hermione and took something out of her cloak. She took a roll of parchment and also a quill and started writing something to it while the other first years is sorted. When she finished, she got off and went outside the Hall.
'What do you reckon' she's doing, Harry?' Ron said muffledly as he ate a piece of bacon. She came back and sat down. As Harry examined her, she was pretty and also very quiet. The whole school whispered to each other, Harry thought they were talking about her. And was curios how she got Sorted to the fifth year.
-----'~.~'-----
When the feast finally ended, the students walked to their dormitory. Their feet was the ones guiding them to the dormitory, with the Prefects in the front. The boys pulled on their pajamas and went to sleep. They found their luggage beside their beds, like usual. Harry couldn't sleep, he closed his eyes but was still thinking about the new girl, about half an hour later Harry fell asleep. He wasn't tired, but someone was singing. Very softly, his eyes beacme drowsy as he listened.
The next day, when the students were having breakfast, Harry, Ron and Hermione noticed that someone from Gryffindor was missing. 'Ellone's missing. D'you think she's okay, Ron?' Harry said. Ron shook his head and started eating the toasts. When they almost finished, Ellone came. 'Good Morning.' Hermione said, Ellone noticed this. She nodded, took a toast and left.
It was Charms first thing in the morning, the other Gryffindors had realised how good Ellone was about Charms, Potions, Transfiguration, Herbology, History of Magic and Arithmancy but not Divination and Care of Magical Creatures. A week had passed, Ellone was very good at lessons but the funny thing is...
'She doesn't have any friend.' Hermione said to Harry and Ron the next day.
'You're kidding, she's so good! How come she doesn't have friends?' Ron said.
'Well, I think Hermione's right. I haven't seen her with anyone else except with the teachers.' Harry responded.
'You guys! I've just heard from Lee! Ellone, that new girl, she got 10 points for Gryffindor from Professor Snape! It's a miracle!' George said, storming to them. Followed shortly by Fred, 'Yeah! And...One more thing about her. Lavender found this out. Ellone, that girl, she got another 5 points!' 'That's impossible!' 'No! We're not jokin'; she's really good!'
The three of them stared at each other when Parvati and Lavender came by, 'Hey, Guys! Fresh news! Ellone got a love letter!' 'A love letter?' Harry, Ron, and Hermione said together. 'Yeah!' 'From who?'
Lavender and Parvati stared at each other and giggled.
'-it's'Lavender began.
'-from'Parvati said
'-Malfoy.' the both of them said, and laughed histericaly.
Harry had an expression of disbelieve, and started laughing too. Followed by Ron and Hermione(she only laughed a little), they looked at Malfoy at the Slytherin table. He was blushing, deeply. Ellone came, took a piece of toast and left. 'What's the matter with her?' Ron said, starting on a toast. Harry and Hermione stared at each other and shook their heads. Ron paused, and started eating again.
When Transfiguration class began, the Gryffindors were studying with the Slytherins. When they were walking Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle, saw Ellone. When Malfoy's eyes met Ellone's, he blushed deeply and left her. She stopped,('Thinking about the love letter I think'Ron commented) looked up and walked off. Inside class, Ellone like always decided to sit alone at the front(I mean she didn't ask anyone to sit with her, no one wanted to). But, Malfoy was the one who sat WITH her on the same table. She just stared at the blushing Malfoy, but then decided to look and listen to Professor McGonnagal instead.
'Funny thing, since Ellone came here I've heard a song at night. Every night.It seemed like whoever who was singing it was also crying. The voice was a bit hoarse.' Ron said. Harry and Hermione looked at him, Ron realised this and asked, 'What?' 'I've been hearing it too!' Hermione and Harry answered in unite. 'Hey, I've heard it too!' a storming Lee said. 'Huh, you too?!' Fred and George answered together.
'It's not only you guys, the whole Gryffindor heard it!' Parvati said. For the next two days, the whole Gryffindor often babbled about it.(Except for Ellone, she just nodded when they asked her if she heard it.) Lots of them ended up having detentions from Professor Snape and also Filch, the caretaker. One day, Hermione told Harry that one of the girls in the Gryffindor dormitory saw a girl standing near the window. She was singing, when she finished she stared at the window and cry. The girl had to use glasses, but she didn't use it because she knew where the water jug was and she can pour it out without the glasses. According to the girl, this girl she saw was the person singing it. She saw this girl two times.
'YOU, LAVENDER and PARVATI are going to stay up all night to see who was singing it?' Ron said in suprise.
'What for, Hermione?' Harry added.
'WHAT FOR? Well, since ever I can't sudy at night! My eyes became drowsy when I heard it! That's why! And it's the same things for Parvati and Lavender!' She said, holding one of the "Guide to Transfiguration". Harry and Ron just stared at each other and pretended to eat when Ellone came, and like always, left with saying nothing.
-----'~.~'-----
Hemione, Parvati and Lavender are ready to see who was singing it. They stayed all night(Hermione told her parents to send them sachets of coffee) and pretended to be sleeping when studying. But was wide awake. Someone had opened the curtains of her(they knew it as it was in the girls dormitory) four-posters and walked silently to the window. Hermione closed her ears and saw her, the girl. The girl that never they thought would be the one. The one that is crying. She is...
To Be Continued...
=========================================================================================================================
@UtH0r"s n0T3: Thanks for reading, please R&R!
Disclaimer:
-All the Harry Potter stuff is JK Rowlings.
-Ellone Carollianne is mine.
-And the "Guide To Transfiguration was a book a made my own.
Special Thanks :
-To the first three reviewers
-To AyanamiRei-Spell checking
-To Vivi Ortinia-For all the Ideas s/he gave me
Please be a VERY responsible reader and review my story, Please..........? I'll send an e-mail for the first three reviewer ! I promise ! ( if I know your e-mail address )
