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Chell POV
Chell sat on her companion cube in a dark, gray basement, she was one of the few refugees left in the village, the rest were hiding as well. Doctor Hank had been the first friendly face she'd seen, and now they were hiding from the actively seeking Combine above ground.
The Combine is still in control of most of the world, the exceptions being the rebels, of course, and the world was not a very good place to call home.
The three months she had been outside had consisted mainly of resisting capture, and hiding while scavenging whatever she could find to make a meal. There was a perk or two though, like how she had started speaking as soon as she left Aperture, Doctor Hank said something about her language center shutting down due to stress, either that or the neurotoxin had damaged it.
"Chell" Hank started, fiddling with a small transceiver "someone's asking for you, they say they're a friend." He said, trying to pass the radio to her.
"You're my only friend." She told him, clearly suspicious.
"Well, they won't talk to me; they say they'll only talk to you." He told her, once again trying to pass her the radio.
"Fine." She grumbles, taking the radio "Who is this?"
"Oh look, another incompetent idiot, I clearly told the last one I'm looking for someone who doesn't talk, and who could stand to lose a few pounds. Do you know of her?"
Chell's voice went cold and hollow when she asked "What do you want?"
"Are you deaf? I will only speak to a certain overweight mute, not you."
Chell tried to savor the computer's reaction as she muttered "Potato." Into the small radio.
The radio fizzed into static before the Announcer could be heard faintly saying "Voice print identified: Test Subject #0001"
"Well, I must say I'm surprised you learned to speak, lunatic. But let's get to business: I need your help." She said.
Chell became mildly curious "In what way?" She asked.
GLaDOS sighed "Look, a test subject escaped and I'm losing control of my facility, I don't know how or why, but he's also managed to break the Cooperative Testing Initiative, and you're the only one I know I can trust to murder things." She said.
Chell laughed.
A long, humiliating laugh that scarred Doctor Hank deeply.
"You? Needing MY help? There's no away in hell I'm coming back to Aperture Chell said, wiping away a tear.
"If you help me, I'll give you a cake for you to consume and gain mass." GLaDOS said.
"Like I'd trust you."
"I swear on my life as a potato that I'll give you a cake, no, TWO, no, as many cakes! As you eat" She said, starting to lose hope and panic.
"Still, no." Chell said, although she was mildly tempted, she was ready to hang up.
"I'll tell you who your mother is!" GLaDOS said frantically, though not meaning to.
Chell stopped, and carefully thought about it "You will?" She asked.
"Yes!" GLaDOS said, her tone coming back to normal.
"Fine." Cell said, after a moment of consideration added "But if you betray me I'll put you into a potato and feed you to The Bird." She said.
"Excellent." GLaDOS said, sounding pleased.
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