EDIT: Okay, hi everyone. I feel really awkward about this and I'm kind of tempted to take this story down, but for some reason it seems like people like it. So, I'm just making sure that you all know I was only thirteen when I wrote this story. It sucks. So just… Don't bag on it too much, okay? I was still learning. I still am, really.


A/N: OKAY EVERYONE! Here is the first chapter of the re-written version of The New Girl In School! I hope you like it! And I beg you to tell me if there isanythingI can improve on! BTW, it's still 6 in the morning! Well, now it's 6:53, but...If you don't get it go and read my author's note from the OLD story.

New Girl In School

Chapter 1

"Lily Evans get your butt up!" Macie Martin, a fifteen-year-old girl with shoulder-length metallic blonde hair and bright blue eyes, cried.

"Ugh," Lily moaned, rolling over. Lily had flaming red hair that was slightly curly and went down to the small of her back, and bright emerald green eyes. She was also fifteen.

"Lily!" Brianna Ryan shouted, smacking Lily over the head with a pillow. Bri had chestnut brown hair that went down to her waist and chocolate brown eyes. She too was fifteen.

These three girls were the best of friends. They were witches and attended Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

"Go away!" Lily shouted, her voice muffled by the pillow.

"Lily, you have to get up. Everyone is suppose to be there," Macie said.

"It's six in the morning! I'm not going anywhere," Lily said, rolling back over.

Bri rolled her eyes and exchanged looks with Macie. Bri flicked her wand and a bucket full of cold water came floating out of the bathroom. It dumped itself over Lily.

Lily screamed and jumped out of bed, soaking wet. She glared at Macie and Bri.

"Oh you are evil," she said.

Macie and Bri smiled."We know."

Lily reached for her wand and dried herself and her bed off. She then changed into her robes and followed Macie and Bri into the bathroom. Lily grabbed a brush and yanked it through her hair.

"What am I doing?" she asked herself. She picked up her wand and gave it a wave. Her hair fixed itself so it was sleek and shining. It was mostly straight, but curled at the end.

Macie ran a brush through her hair, staring into the mirror."What to do?" she wondered aloud.

Macie grabbed her wand and flicked it. Her hair quickly arranged into two braids. It was childish, but on Macie, anything looked good.

Bri didn't need a wand to do her hair. She just brushed it and it was done. She liked to leave it down, because when she was younger, her mother forced her to wear it up all the time.

When they went downstairs, practically everyone in Gryffindor was down there.

James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew were huddled in the corner, whispering. Sirius said something to James, who turned to look at Lily.

James walked over, ruffling his jet black hair. He shook his head to move it away from his almond-shaped hazel eyes.

"Hullo Evans," he said.

"Potter," she growled.

James threw an arm around her shoulder. Lily smiled. Her friends were horrified. They knew that look. It wasn't a good sign.

"You have five seconds to remove your tenticles from me," Lily said, still smiling.

James, who thought the smile was a good thing, said,"Come on Evans. You know you like me."

"5...4...3...2..."

James didn't remove his arm, for he didn't think Lily was really going to do anything. How wrong he was.

"1," she said, stomping down on his foot as hard as possible. He yelped in pain. Lily and her friends laughed. A lot of other people joined in, until Sirius glared at them, his wand clenched in his hand.

"We'd better get downstairs," Lily said to her friends, checking her watch. They nodded and followed her.

Downstairs, people were already filing into the Great Hall for breakfast. Macie, Bri, and Lily sat down and began to eat their breakfast. By the time practically everyone was finished, Dumbledore stepped up.

"Good morning students! As you all know, we have a new student coming from Beauxbatons. Her name is Allisandra Mylivun and I expect you to make her feel welcome, no matter what house she is put in."

Dumbledore looked sternly at the Marauders. They smiled innocently back.

The door opened and a girl with waist length raven black hair and icy blue eyes stepped in. She slowly walked to the front of the hall and sat down on the stool. McGonagall placed the sorting hat on her head.

For minutes, it was silent.

Suddenly, the hat shouted,"GRYFFINDOR!"

A/N: There's the first chapter everyone! I hope you liked it! Keep a look out for the second chapter, coming soon!