I just noticed a number of orthography errors in this chapter. I apologize and currently fixed the mistakes.
Footstep noises filled the halls of a palace at Freeza 68#. The noises came from 3 figures, a flame-haired man, a bald goliath, and a man with long hair.
All of those men were dressed as soldiers and one of them had an angry look on his face, the shortest two of them had black armors with yellow shoulder pads, and the shortest of the three was using a white armor with the same kind of shoulder pads, but he was using a blue suit.
"I wonder what kind of mission Freeza will give us this time." - Said the bald goliath
"Nappa, if you don't have anything important to say, then I ask you to shut up!" - Said the flame-haired man
"R-Right, Vegeta."
A smirk could be clearly seen in the long haired man's face, however, they quickly noticed the big gate that they were approaching. Beyond that gate, there was a small horned alien, sitting in a flying chair, a pink fat monstrosity and a peculiar colored man.
"You may report your mission's status now." - The horned alien said in an amused tone of voice
The trio then entered the room filled with banners, walked to the center of the room and knelt down.
"We just got back from the purge of planet Meat, 100% of the population was exterminated and no construction was damaged as you asked, Lord Freeza." - Said Vegeta
One of the other men standing by Lord Freeza started to smile in a mocking way, causing a confused look of Nappa and the other men.
"Vegeta, how much time did it took to complete said purge?"
"Only 3 days."
As soon as he said it, the 2 men behind Vegeta smiled with pride, they would surely get a reward for the time record. But that wasn't what they got. The man went from mocking smile to mocking laughter, much to the kneeling men's rage.
"Hey, to Zarbon, how much time would you take to purge Meat?" - He asked his comrade.
"Dodoria, I say I would take 1 full day."
After seconds, Zarbon, Dodoria, and the horned alien started laughing in a mocking way. When the laughter died down, the man in the middle said between laughs.
"Now, now, Zarbon. Let's not anger our pet monkeys, okay?"
Nappa then stood up, he was ready to take on the man who ridicules them in an everyday basis. He then proceeded to jump towards Freeza.
"Nappa! You will stop right now or I'll kill you myself!" - Yelled Vegeta
The moment he said that, Nappa was hit by Zarbon, everyone in the room could hear the bald giant's jaw then screamed in pain, but he didn't stop his jumped again, this time towards the green-haired warrior. But Zarbon dodged the giant and kicked him in the was hurled to the walls and almost broke his neck.
"So, monkey, will you stop fighting... Well, not fighting. More like jumping and waving your arms like a madman" - Said Zarbon while laughing
"Y-You will n-not mock a S-Saiyan warrior!" - Nappa said while running towards Zarbon again.
Nappa screamed in pain... But not because Zarbon attacked him since it was a hit from behind. Nappa could feel the hand of the attacker piercing through his chest and when he turned his eyes to see the one who would die once he recovered, he paled when he noticed that the one who almost killed him was the Prince of all Saiyans, Vegeta.
"W-What?! V-Vegeta?! W-Why?! - Asked Nappa while he gasped for air, wondering why would someone he considered a friend, maybe even a son, try to kill him?
"Nappa! I don't care if you have suicidal tendencies, but as long as you live, you work under me! Do you hear me?!" - Yelled a really angry Vegeta
He then proceeded to remove his arm from Nappa's chest, the giant then felt into the hard floor. Vegeta carried Nappa's body to the gate and went back to the room.
Kneeling down into the same spot he was at the beginning of the mission's, the other man, Raditz, was dumbfounded by the fact that Vegeta would go that far for someone he would kill once he got strong enough. To kill a fellow Saiyan, you'd have to be a sadistic psychopath.
"I guess I never knew Vegeta." - thought Raditz.
"Anything else, Lord Fre-UGH!" - Vegeta was interrupted by a purple beam of energy, piercing his chest. The flame-haired Saiyan coughed up blood and noticed that the beam was coming from the horned alien's finger. Freeza let out a small laugh, that revealed the insanity he held inside of him.
"Vegeta, what happened just proves that you can't control your fellow monkeys."
"Tell me, why should I allow you to live after you failed me like this?" - Freeza said with a severe look on his face.
Vegeta tried to stand up, but the pain was overwhelming could feel his senses abandoning him. He was about to die. He tried to think about anything that he could use to save himself from that situation. He couldn't just die now, could he? The prince of all Saiyans, the strongest Saiyan to ever live, would die without ever amounting to anything?
His thoughts were interrupted when Raditz, shot an energy blast at the soldiers scouters, causing dust and smoke to spread through the proceeded to carry up Vegeta's body and ran away.
"Why the hell would I do this?!" - thought the long haired-Saiyan.
Raditz honestly didn't know why he did this, he risked his life for what? Saving someone who did not even care about him? It didn't matter anymore, he had to get away from Planet Freeza 68# and get to somewhere safe. His tail around his waist and blood starting to drip on the ground.
"Dammit! Why did I have to be so stupid?! Grr-I have to find a way outside of Freeza's gras-Wait, the ships! I'll use them to get out of here, I'll go to a planet far away from here!" - thought Raditz.
After minutes of running, he finally arrived at the ship's area. He put Vegeta inside of a ship and set it up to go to Planet going inside his own ship he thought about Nappa.
Should he go back for him? It only took him 1 second until he got an answer.
"As much as I want to... It's too late for him..." - Said Raditz, showing genuine concern for the tall Saiyan
He looked to Vegeta's pod before entering his own, why did he save him? The bastard who not only mocked him ever since they met each other but killed a fellow Saiyan that was trying to regain the pride he lost over the years.
"... God dammit... I hate the guy, but he's the only one who could even stand a chance at damaging Freeza"
Now, the 2 Saiyans were crossing the stars towards one goal: Defeating Freeza, the Emperor of the Universe.
"God dammit!" - Yelled Zarbon still standing in the same room where the Saiyans rebelled
Now, the room was somewhat filled with dust and smoke from Raditz's and Zarbon didn't know what to do in this situation. Their first impulse was to chase the running Saiyan.
"Zarbon, I want you to call someone to end those filthy monkeys."
"A-As you wish, my Lord." - Said Zarbon as he ran towards the communicator room
The mood in the room appeared to calm down now, Freeza sat down in his flying chair and drank a cup of wine.
He sighed - "Honestly, I would leave those monkeys alive, but it's becoming harder and harder for me to hold back on Vegeta when I punish him for whatever mistake he makes"
"W-What do you mean, Lord Freeza?" - Asked a kneeling Dodoria
"I can control my energy output, Dodoria."
"W-What?! H-How?!"
"That is something I don't know, but I know about the zenkai ability the Saiyans have."
"If I punished Vegeta at full force, he would recover, and get all the strength he needed to match me in this form." - Explained the horned alien
"Now to dispose of the body" - As he pointed to Nappa.
"Dodoria, would you do the honors?"
"Y-Yes, Lord Freeza."
Dodoria then walked to Nappa's dying corpse, he elevated his arm and started to focus energy into it, creating a little sphere of energy on the palm of his hand, pointed it at the bald goliath and the sphere quickly became a beam of pure energy, completely disintegrating the one known as Nappa.
So, uhh, I don't know what to say. Only that this is my first fanfiction, so any constructive criticism is welcomed.
I should also explain about the zenkai system I'll be using in this fanfiction, and possibly others.
Zenkai
Zenkai is what happens when a Saiyan recovers from a fight. The event raises the said Saiyan's strength to surpass the enemy in question, therefore putting the Saiyans as the warrior race with most potential go grow.
I used some elements of Captain Space's logic(Zenkais elevate you to the same level of strength as your enemy if he's stronger than you.)
Example
When Vegeta got beat by Goku in the beam struggle on Earth, Vegeta had a power level of around 18,000 to 20,000 and Goku had a base of 9,000(with the Kaioken 4x Kamehameha:24,000). When Vegeta recovers from the blast, his Zenkai elevated his power level to what?24,000.
FAQ
Q: So zenkais get you to the same strength as someone you fought and consider an enemy. What happens when said Saiyan go Super Saiyan?
A: Since Zenkais are there to not only help you get stronger but also get Super Saiyan, the effects of Zenkais are reduced when a Saiyan reaches the point of going Super Saiyan. It still only happens when an enemy is stronger than you and you consider him an enemy, but instead of raising you to the same level of strength, it only raises your power level by 1.2x after you go Super Saiyan.
Q: What if a Saiyan see his "enemy" die before he gets the Zenkai boost?
A: Since there is no longer a need to surpass that enemy, the Zenkai effects are cut in half.
Q: I s there a way to get a Zenkai even if your enemy dies?
A: Yes, but it involves you getting knocked out before you see your enemy die, your mind will not acknowledge the fact that the one you consider an enemy is dead, therefore your body will still see the need to give you the full effects of the Zenkai.
Q: What happens to a Saiyan that got beat up by a Super Saiyan?
A: Unfortunately for him, The Zenkai that he receives will only put him up to be a match for the enemy Saiyan's base. Since Super Saiyan is an elevated state of the Saiyan's power, it can't be considered his base. The Zenkai will only elevate him to the base of the Super Saiyan.
Example: Paragus and Broly=Broly as a kid in his first movie managed to hurt his father by a fair amount when he was ravaging a planet. Paragus didn't get enough power to control his son when he was transformed, even if he was supposed to have an enormous Zenkai.
Q:(Following question above)And what if the Saiyan that was defeated was also a Super Saiyan?
A: When Saiyans become Super Saiyans, the zenkai effects are greatly reduced to the point of simply not mattering anymore in the story.
