I'm back with a new story. I had a hard time trying to think of a good title so it took me a while to publish this story. Also, I might change this story from a T to an M; I don't know yet, I'm seeing how this plays out. For now, it will be a T but if I want to add a lemon or something, then I will change it to an M.
Anyway, enjoy the chapter and I don't own Divergent.
Chapter 1
"Congratulations, initiates," exclaimed Tobias. "You are now official Dauntless members."
I smiled as the new Dauntless members cheered and exclaimed how happy they were that they made Dauntless. It has been two years since I made Dauntless and I train transfers along with Tobias; I also work at the tattoo parlor after initiation is over. This year, we had 11 transfers: 5 Erudite, 4 Candor, 1 Amity, and 1 Abnegation. Out of the 11 transfers, only 5 people made it: 2 Erudite, 2 Candor, and the one Abnegation.
An arm wrapping around my waist snapped me out of my thoughts. I looked up and smiled when I saw Tobias staring at me. "Another year has gone by already," he said
"Yup, but this time no one went after either of us," I replied. Last year, an initiate tried to get me to go one a date with him but Tobias made sure the guy knew I was taken. This time, thankfully, no one tried to flirt with me or Tobias.
"Want to go back to the apartment?"
"Sure."
We walked out of the pit and towards our apartment; yes, our apartment. Tobias asked me if I wanted to move in with him and I said yes. We walked into the apartment and I sat down on the bed. I suddenly realized something and shot up. "Shoot!"
"What?" Tobias asked, confusion on his face.
"I promised I would meet Christina at her apartment."
"Is she taking you shopping?"
"Thankfully, no. She said she had something to tell me." I kissed Tobias's cheek and walked out of the apartment. "I'll see you later." I started walking towards Christina's apartment when I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around, thinking it was Tobias, when I saw no one there. I felt something hit my neck and I blacked out.
FOUR'S POV
I had just finished taking a shower and I was ready to go to Zeke's place when a knock sounded at the door. I opened it to find Christina standing there.
"Hi, Four. Is Tris here?" she asked.
"No, she left to go to your place about 10 minutes ago. Why is she not there?" I asked, getting worried.
Christina shook her head. "I thought she forgot so I came to get her. Oh, and this man came up to me and asked me to give you this note." Christina handed me the note and I took it from her. "I'm going to check the pit." After she left, I opened the note and started to read it.
I have your girlfriend, and if you want to see her again, follow these directions. Come alone or else your girlfriend will pay the price.
A thousand thoughts ran through my head as I thought as to who could have taken Tris. Taking a gun and a knife with me, I walked out of the apartment and followed the directions that would lead me to Tris. I jumped on a train once I got out of Dauntless and rode it till I got to the Factionless area. I jumped off the train and started walking. I took out my gun and looked around, searching for anyone that might jump me.
A man then appeared and I pointed my gun at him. "Where's Tris?"
"Put the gun down or your girlfriend gets hurt," ordered the man.
If I put the gun down, then I'll be open for an attacking, I thought. But if I don't, Tris will get hurt. I then remembered the knife I had and dropped the gun.
"And the knife."
Shit. I took out the knife and dropped it as well. "Now what?" I asked but my question was answered when I felt something hit me in the back of the head, knocking me out.
I woke up and found myself in a dark room. I looked around, trying to find out where I'm at when I heard a moan. I noticed Tris was lying a few feet away from me. I walked over to her and lifted her up from the ground. "Tris, wake up," I said, shaking her a little. Tris opened her eyes and stared at me. "Tobias?"
"What happened?"
"I was walking to Christina's apartment when someone came up behind me and knocked me out. The next thing I know, I wake up to you shaking me." Tris looked around the room. "Where are we?"
"I don't know. I want to say we are in some building near the Factionless but I can't say for sure."
A door then opened and Tris and I looked to see who it was. My eyes widen and I heard Tris gasp beside me when I saw the man who abused me most of my life, the man who I called 'father', Marcus.
What a better way to start a story with our two main characters getting kidnapped by Marcus, even though probably most of you are screaming at me for leaving it at a cliffhanger. Review and tell me what you all think :)
