Ok.. I tried to do this story before many years ago, but I've come back to it hoping that I can recover my imagination lol. I've tweaked it and twisted and I'm hoping to be able to get through it good this time :)

Please enjoy


A New Adventure Begins...

The story begins on a cold, crisp night on the planet Cypher. It is in an alternate dimension and pays a close resemblance to Earth and seen running through an alleyway, is a cloaked figure. His name is Jack, an 18 year old, young man with abnormal powers. He comes from a long line of an ancient race of people who were capable of manipulating the elements, such as: fire, water, earth, wind, lightning and ice. Jack however, instead of only controlling one type of element, showed potential in being able to use a large quantity of the powers with enough training. He also possessed a hidden ability, which only the elders and his parents of his village knew about. Once he had grown up more and he was becoming more acknowledged in the world, there were fiends awaiting his perish.

The Sovereign, a leader of an unknown source of darkness. He controlled all 6 elements which surprised many of the elementals as only once every millennia, would someone be born with all the elements. It was then when he had raised his ugly head into the world that people realised. Jack could be the one in the prophecy handed down from ancient times telling of a great darkness threatening the world and only a warrior of 6 elements can stand up to it. The Sovereign found out about Jack's possible future, so he decided to take him down before he could become a threat. Wave after wave of soldiers and assassins came to kill. However, Jack managed to foil many of the Sovereign's plans, much to his annoyance. Many things happened in the time the Sovereign appeared and back to his latest attack, he had sent soldiers of elite class in element powers. Jack however, unable to fully control his powers because of the lack of training he was able to do, had no choice but to run. So we pick up we left him at the beginning.

Jack turned around and dodged an oncoming fireball,

"That was close" thought Jack.

He knew these elites were strong and starting to catch up, also remembering the layout of the area he was in, it wouldn't be long before he would be cornered. Jack thought quickly for a strategy, but he wasn't completely ready for fighting a variety of element powers without countering all of them at once.

"Damn, sorry elders, looks like I need to use my special power... the power of dimension jumping" Jack thought as another couple of fireballs along with ice shards came hurtling past him. His elders told him not to use his power excessively, also not to escape from school but that was irrelevant at this moment. Although one day they told him to use it quickly to get to the next town as he was in danger if he stayed. Jack followed their order and returned the next day only to find carnage and destruction. His village... his parents... his friends. All gone thanks to the Sovereign. He made a pledge to defeat the one that did this, although he needed to train even more now.

Jack's thoughts left him completely as he turned a corner and a bolt of lightning struck him in the arm, knocking him flying of his feet and crashing into the opposite wall. The elites stopped running and walked eerily towards Jack, ready to strike. Jack looked up and with what strength he had, moved over and slammed his fist on the ground in front of them,

"Take this!" he shouted as a small earthquake shook the ground, knocking them off balance and stopping their attacks.

"It's now or never..." Jack thought as he jumped up clutching his arm and running to an open area on the other side of a small alleyway. He focused quickly and a portal appeared out of nowhere in front of him. Not hesitating for a second even though he didn't think of a place to go to, he jumped in turning around to see the fiends behind him, cursing him.

"I would hate to be their shoes right now" he chuckled to himself, knowing the Sovereign would be mighty pissed off with their failure. "I wonder where I'll end up?" thought Jack with a puzzled look, it was at that moment he clutched his arm in pain as the wound from earlier acted up. He remembered that the lightning element had a side effect, where the user could activate the secondary power of the element when he wanted to. It was a discharge that struck the whole part of the body that was hit; some called it the "time bomb" effect. With that, Jack was knocked unconscious and hurtled through the dimensions, till an exit opened up.

Wearily waking up, Jack managed to make out his surroundings. He was in a forest of some sort and he could hear the slight sound of people's laughter and voices nearby. The force of the fall and the hit from the lightning sapped all of his strength.

"Looks like I'll have to wait till my strength is back before I can look around." Jack thought before consciousness left him.


Right the 1st chapter is done. I'm hoping that you liked it as I'm classing this as my 1st fanfiction. please review and I shall continue with the story. :)