Hi people. Just so you know, This is a book I'm writing and hoping to get published. It's about a girl named Adrenaline that protects the 4 kingdoms from the demons of the dark lord. She knows something about the southern king that she's not suppose to know so he sends his son out to capture her. While she's killing demons she accidentally gets transported to the avatar world. This first chapter is the first part of my book. I thought you'd like to read it since other people say it's really good. I hope you enjoy it and please read and reply. Thank you for your time. Enjoy.
It's a dark night in the Northern kingdom. All the guards are out surrounding the castle following the orders given by the king.
A soldier approaches the king's chamber with news that would change his life forever.
"WHAT! That is impossible!" The king stormed out of his room to see what was put on the royal throne of the Northern King. He approached the seat and carefully picked up the scroll tied with a red ribbon. He unraveled the scroll and carefully read it.
"This...this is impossible! How did this get here!"
"Sire, nobody knows. One of the counsil members walked by and saw it lying there."
"Has anybody else read this?"
"No sire, you would be the first to examine the scroll."
The King's hands were trembling as he reread the parchment. His eyes kept looking at the red ribbon he held. He knew who sent it. There was only one person he knew of that used a red ribbon to hold a scroll.
"Sir, the room is secured. Nobody can get in."
"That's what you think."
"Sir, may I ask what exactly you hired us for?"
"I was afraid if I told you earlier you wouldn't help me. She's coming for me. She's coming tonight."
"Who is coming for you sir?"
"You might of heard of her. Her name...Adrenaline."
"Sir, that woman is a legend; A myth people talk about for their own fun."
"No she's real. When you do the things I've done you will pay. I've been helping the Dark Lord with his plans. He wanted me to be able to launch an attack in the city of Madrien. He wanted to be able to control the sea routes in the Southern Kingdom. By controlling the sea routes, food and weapons made there would not be able to cross over, leaving the other kingdoms vulnerable to attacks. I was just about ready to lead my men there when first division was slaughtered. One soldier informed me that a woman came and killed everyone. After I was told he died. That's how I know she's coming after me."
"No one can get past my men sir. She'll be dead before she even gets close to the fortress."
A soldier opened the door and whispered into the man's ear. "WHAT!" The soldier left.
"So...are you still sure she won't get passed the fortress?" There was a racket outside then silence. The handle on the door started to turn. The man took out a bag with little silver spear-like heads and placed it on the table. He moved his hand up and the little silver spear heads floated in mid-air. He instantly shot has hand in the direction of the door and the spears went right through it. It was silent. The man walked to the door and stepped out. A scream pierced the silence followed by a loud thud.
"You must be Adrenaline right? The red outfit and the knives." He saw her reflection in the glass he was holding.
"Yes I am."
"So what happens now? You're just going to kill me just like that?" He gripped the knife in his hand. "There will be more after me, including an army with hundreds of demons. How are you going to destroy all of them?"
"I'll take my chances."
"But I won't." He stood up ready to stab her with the knife.
She threw one of her knives at him, making a direct hit in his chest. He fell back into the chair he was sitting in. She walked over to him and pulled out the knife. She flipped her knives in her hands and put them back in the sheaths that were strapped to her side. She exited the room and entered the darkness of night. She had killed the fifty guards protecting the fortress. She finished her job...for now.
So...what do you think? I really hoped you enjoyed it. R&R plz.
