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Rated: E · Campfire Creative · Script/Play · Fanfiction · #2081471

It's set in the far future where wonders are not impossible.

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[Introduction]
[Neithian monitoring room]
(As Kidd continues to explore his cell.)
NEITHIAN: Thousands of us are already probing the creature's thoughts, Magistrate. We find excellent memory capacity.
MAGISTRATE: I read most strongly a recent death struggle in which it fought to protect its life. We will begin with this, giving the specimen something more interesting to protect.

[Delta Alpha Colony]
(A strange mysterious woman name Rita appears out of nowhere.)
RITA: Come on, we must hide ourselves. Come, come. Hurry. It's deserted. There'll be weapons and perhaps replicators where we can replicate food for us.
(She's running towards him from a rusty metallic fortress that's composed metallic junk and stuff.)
KIDD: This is the Delta Alpha Colony.
RITA: Please, we must hide ourselves.
KIDD: I was in a cage, a cell, in some kind of a zoo. I must still be there.
RITA: Come on.
KIDD: They've reached into my mind and taken the memory of somewhere I've been.
RITA: The androids!
KIDD: It's starting just as it happened two weeks ago. Except for you.

[The Rusty Metallic Fortress]
(The courtyard is scattered with metal scraps and spears.)
KIDD: Different woman. Different dress. Why are they creating different girls for me?
(Charles the supreme leader enters - a big humanoid android with shield and axe.)
RITA: Quick. If you attack while he's not looking.
KIDD: But it's only a dream.
RITA: You have to kill him as you did here before.
KIDD: You can tell my jailers I won't go along with it. I'm not an animal performing for its supper.
RITA: It doesn't matter what you call this, you'll feel it. That's what matters. You'll feel every moment of whatever happens to you. Please, don't you know what he'll do to us?
(so Kidd fights Charles with mace and shield.)
KIDD: Why would an illusion be frightened?
RITA: Because that's the way you imagined me.
KIDD: Who are you? You act as if this were really you.
RITA: Careful.
(Kidd and Rita retreat up some rusty metallic stairs. Charles breaks Kidd's spear and they throw objects at it. Kidd gets knocked down into the courtyard. Charles grabs Rita and Kidd pulls out a plasma gun and then fires a ball of pure, hot plasma into Charles back. Then he jumps down and spears himself on a wicked harpoon that Kidd grabs just in time.)

[Kidd's cell]

RITA: It's over.
(Rita hugs her hero, then sees the Neithians watching them. The Neithians leave. And she vanishes into thin air. Suddenly, another woman appears out of nowhere. Her name is Vina.)
KIDD: Who are you?
VINA: My name's Vina. What's your name?
KIDD: Captain Jacob James Kidd, United Quantum Slipstream Ship Olympia.
VINA: Nice to meet you, Captain.
(Kidd looks puzzled.)
KIDD: Why are you here?
VINA: To please you.
KIDD: Are you real?
VINA: As real as you wish.
KIDD: No, no. No, that's not an answer. I've never met you before, never even imagined you.
VINA: Perhaps they made me out of dreams you've forgotten.
KIDD: What, and dress you in the same metal fabric they wear?
VINA: I have to wear something, don't I? I can wear whatever you wish, be anything you wish.
KIDD: So they can see how their specimen performs? They want to see how I react, is that it?
VINA: Don't you have a dream, something you've always wanted very badly?
KIDD: Or do they do more than just watch me? Do they feel with me, too?
VINA: You can have whatever dream you want. I can become anything, any woman you've ever imagined. You can have anything you want in the whole universe. Let me please you.
KIDD: Yes. Yes, you can please me. You can tell me about them. Is there any way I can keep them from probing my mind, from using my thoughts against me? Does that frighten you? Does that mean there is a way?
VINA: You're a fool.
KIDD: Since you're not real, there's not much point in continuing this conversation, is there.

[The icy blue planet's surface]
(A big laser cannon is aimed at the door in the rock.
NABVER: All circuits engaged, Mister Taujan.
TAUJAN [OC]: Standing by, Number One.
NABVER: Take cover.
TAUJAN [OC]: Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one.
(The laser cannon blasts away)
NABVER: Increase to full power! Can you give us any more?
TAUJAN [OC]: Our circuits are beginning to heat. We'll have to cease power.
NABVER: Disengage. The top of that knoll should have been sheared off the first second.
GLAGLIB: Maybe it was. It's what I tried to explain in the briefing room. Their power of illusion is so great, we can't be sure of anything we do, anything we see.

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