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Everlasting
She lets him come to her because she knows there's no point waiting for the one she'd rather have in her arms, pushing himself inside her. She closes her eyes so she doesn't have to see his face and imagines the calluses on the hands at her breasts are formed from tan skin, that the soft hair between her delicate fingers is golden, that the eyes drilling through her are blue, blue, blue…
He goes to her because he knows she's the only one who understands, the only other one to want the same thing her had. He doesn't close his eyes, loves torturing himself with his anguish as he pleases her with his hands; the hair is black and too long, the skin pale and too soft, the eyes closed where they should be open and lovingdaringcaringhoping…
They come together because whom they really want they can never have. There's not even a distant chance because his body was destroyed and his name dishonored and they are the only ones who remember what it was like to bask in his love, and between them lies his ghost, bold and bright and everlasting as the sun…
