This is a new story me and my brother is working on; Naruto: Dark Sands. Here's you go.
Prologue: The Dark Trio's past
It shows a dark night near Konoha, as a menacing growl is heard. Everyone turns to see the forest ruffle a bit.
The ground shakes as a roar is heard. Everyone looked up to see a evil-looking orange fox with dark red eyes, nine-large tails, and also a menacing look in his eyes. This is the Kyuubi, the Nine-Tailed fox.
It roars as it began to smash buildings and crush people. But over-looking the whole thing was a trio of young Suna villagers.
One was laughing his head off. "What wimps!" said the laughing man.
The man had long blue hair in a ponytail, dark red eyes with 12 black dots inside, a purple jumpsuit under a black and purple cloak with a hood. His jumpsuit had long gloves and boots attached to where it should be. Around his right was a strange symbol hidden under bandages, and on his back was a strange black circle with a smaller red one in the middle (making it look like a large eye) On his right ankle was a headband with a strange symbol on it.
"These guys are better off under the ocean. I can take thing down with a flick of my wrist!" laughed the young man.
"Don't be so cocky, Modis." Said a young woman, who whacked him upside the head.
The young woman had light brown hair in a side ponytail, a belt with strange looking, 13 gourds similar to a certain Suna villager. She was wearing a similar to Modis's, only more feminine and looked more like regular clothing; a dark purple shirt with a yellow circle on the chest part, dark colored pants, and also no gloves. Around her neck was her headband.
"Easy Shikamari." Modis said with a hint of humor in his voice. "We don't need to get into each other's shoes, do we?"
"That doesn't make sense!" said Shikamari with a hint of annoyance in her voice.
A voice then asks "Who is that in the tree?" They turn to see a young man with dark red hair, dark circles over his dark green eyes, a light skin tone, a cloak over his clothing, which was similar to Modis's…only less of a jumpsuit and with a sash over his chest, covered with small pouches. His headband was on his right arm.
Modis laughed and says "Ah Larra, our fearless leader. I forgot you were there."
Larra gave him a look as he says calmly "Modis, go see who it is."
"Okay, be right back." Said Modis, as he suddenly turn blurry for a second before saying "I know who it is; a guy controlling the Great Fox."
"Be more specific." Shikamari said with annoyance.
Modis sighs and says "From what I saw; a orange mask with only one eye-hole, a black cloak and that's it."
Larra sighs and says "Lets see if we can capture the Great Fox."
Shikamari then saw something; a large red-colored toad with a vest and a large sword on it's back. Her pupil's shrank as she says "L-Lar-Larra! Mo-Mo-Modis! There's a-a-a…"
"Toad?" Modis asked. "IS that the word you looking for. Uh…Shikamari? You okay?" He then saw her pass out. "She hasn't gotten over her phobia of frogs?"
"Seems so." Larra said calmly as he saw a figure on top of the toad. "Lets just relax and see what he'll do."
The figure then glowed bright white as the two young men covered their eyes. And then they saw…the fox was gone! Modis looked shocked as he says "What? The fox! IT's Gone! Poof! Nada! Man, our contract is ruined! Ah, that money for nothing!"
"Shut up." Larra said plainly. "Lets go." As he got Shikamari over his shoulder, but stopped when he heard crying. "Hmm? A infint? Modis!"
Modis nods and says "Got it." He got into position and vanishes. He comes back a second later. "I saw a baby, and want to know what?"
"What?" asked Larra, confused.
"He now carries…the Great Fox!" said Modis, as Larra groans.
"Another one? Just what this world needs," Larra groaned, rubbing his temples. "Lets go. We'll be back in a few years…"
"What about the contract?" asked Modis. "I WANT THE MONEY! How are we supposed to pay for our rent?"
Larra then says "We'll just steal it from a rich man, duh."
"But I…but…that's a good idea, actually," said Modis, rubbing his chin. "See ya in a week!" as he suddenly took off to the north, leaving a sonic boom a second after.
Larra sighs as he walked on, not knowing that he was being followed.
A few miles later, Modis was waiting by a strange temple, waiting for his teammates. He then saw Larra and says "About time. IT took you about…" He looked up and saw the sun was coming up. "5 hours, did you walk?"
Larra says "What do you think?" Shikamari asked with annoyance.
"What did you? Sing? Kiss little boys? Kiss Larra? Give money to the Poor? That would be stupid though…well, if you give money to the poor, give it to yourself. Better yet…me. Just call me the treasurer,"
Then suddenly a whip made out of sand hits Modis. "Somehow…I think I deserved that." Modis whispered to as the sand suddenly turns into grass on him. Larra's hands were outstretched, meaning he did that.
"Lets go inside. We need to rest." Larra said calmly as he walked ahead.
"You mean you need to rest. I feel fine." Modis said with a hint of sarcasm. Shikamari gave him a look as he says "Shutting up." Modis said, holding up his hands as he walked in.
Following them was a man clad in a black, demonic armor with a ripped cape and dark red marks covering the chest plate. He walked ahead, as he removed his helmet; showing off an old looking man with a long beard.
Larra and his teammates walked threw the temple, seeing prophesies of different people. Modis groans as he says "Boring! Where's mine? I know! It's up there!" He vanishes, but comes back a second later. "Dang it!"
Shikamari sighs as she hears something behind her. She turns around as she gets out a kunai, a strange looking black metal dagger.
Larra puts a hand out and suddenly a slab of rock near him suddenly melts down into a pile of sand and it began to move towards him.
The old man smirked evilly as he did a few hand signs. "Time style: Frozen time jutsu!"
"What?" asked Modis, confused? Suddenly a flash of light began to engulf all four of them, as the man looked surprised.
"Wait! It wasn't supposed to hit me t-!" the temple froze in time; the fire didn't flicker, mice and birds froze in the middle of their activities. The sand that Larra made stayed suspended in the air as all of them looked shocked.
It zoomed out of the temple as suddenly it shows the temple; a large building with a frozen clock on the tallest tower. It was now suspended in the 'air' by a silver-blue energy, and suddenly words formed from that.
Naruto: The Dark SandsEnd of chapter 1
What do you think so far? Well, I know I showed a few instance of the Kyuubi attack, but that was just supposed to show that they were there at the time. Anyway, please Read, Review and Suggest away!
