Konan: Rosalen-sama it's good that you are re-writing the first few stories.

Me: well thank you Konan.

Konan:

Me: and right now as I'm re-writing this there is thunder and it is annoying

Hidan: *hugs me*

Me: Hidan why are you hugging me

Hidan: because I want too

Lenalee: Hidan you are so weird

Allen: not as weird as Sasori

Lavi: did Allen just say something mean *gasp*

Allen: no I didn't Lavi

Lenalee: Rosalen-sama does not own the Akatsuki or any of the characters besides the five main characters.


Chapter 1

(The Akatsuki Appear)

Akira woke up from a nice dream (for once) with someone yelling at her. She opened her eyes to see a pale girl with dirty blonde hair and crystal blue eyes staring at her. Akira nearly fell out of her queen size bed when she saw the girl standing at her bed side.

"Akira, how long are you going to sleep. It's almost time for school." The crystal blue girl said with her hands on her hips looking at the girl still in bed. Akira just moved back into her house after her aunt recovered from a cold. And her three best friends live with her and Akira is also starting school late.

"Geez Momoko. I'm still tired and was in the middle of a good dream and you know I don't have many of them. So leave me alone so I can dream some more." Akira explained and turned over to face the window. The girl known as Momoko sighed and walked over to the window. Then, there was a bright light and Akira pulled her black sheets up over her so that the light wouldn't hurt her sensitive violet eyes.

Momoko (being a good friend and also known Akira sense they were little) opened the scarlet velvet currents to try to wake the sleeping girl but it didn't work. So she thought 'should I get a bucket of freezing cold water or do something else,' she choose to do something else and that was walking over to the girl and moving to her ear. "WAKE UP." Momoko yelled in Akira's ear and the girl didn't move then the dirty-blonde realized that her friend was plugged in to some music. So Momoko mused about something else then it hit her, she walked to the end of the bed and pulled off the covers.

Akira felt something cold hit her feet. She took the ear buds out and noticed that she didn't have her covers on her and she was now cold (her room was about 55 degrees,{each room had its own thermostat} but she was also wearing black shorts with she own little design on it{A heart with a devil wing and angel wing} and one of her favorite shirts, a black tang-top with a picture of the Zombie team from the Akatsuki) she looked at her sister-like friend who was standing on the bottom of the bed holding a black star printed quilt in her hands. "What the hell are you doing with my quilt? Momoko, you know it's cold in my room so give it back." Akira wined, Momoko just looked at her and said "No! This is the only way to get you out of bed. And it's your fault that your room is cold. You have the thermostat at 55 degrees, turn it up idiot," then Momoko took the quilt and headed for the door, "and hurry up and get ready then come down stairs for breakfast," the blue eye replied leaving the room and went down stairs.


-Down stairs -

'Geez that girl is so stubborn. I should have gotten the fizzing water but then I didn't want to hear to yell and scream at me for getting her bed wet and being force to wash them' Momoko thought to herself as she walked down the steps and throw the quilt on the couch. She heard Akira get out of bed and head for her own bathroom. Momoko walked in to the dining room to be greeted by the others, Kiyomi and Kyoko, who are now eating. "Hey Momoko. Is the evil queen up yet." Kiyomi asked then grabbed a piece of toast. Momoko walked in to the kitchen and started to make Akira's and her own food. "I wouldn't really call her an evil queen Kiyomi. And yes she is up, and that was the hard thing to do." Momoko noted then went back to cooking.


-Up stairs-

"Geez, that Momoko. Taking my quilt and leaving with it."Akira mumbled and walked to her light purple painted bathroom and took a shower. When she got out there was steam everywhere, walking back into her room she saw the school uniform on her now quilted bed. Akira looked at the outfit and growled. She hated the color and wanted to through it out the window. A pink plaid knee length skirt, white bottom-up short sleeved blouse, and a pink long sleeved sailor jacket, adding white socks and black sneakers. It was something that the violet eye girl would never wear, not even to safe her own life, but she had to wear it anyways.

Akira put the outfit on and then looked in her full body mirror that was behind her door. To say the least it really did look good on her. After doing that she went back into her bathroom, brushed her teeth, and her waist length black hair, then to add the finishing touches, she made makeup. Right before her put her make up on Akira had to put on her dark green eye contacts to hind the violet eyes, then started to put on black eye-liner (top and bottom, and her face didn't have any zits so she was fine) then adding a dark red lip-gloss. She walked out of the bathroom, taking one last look at herself in her mirror thinking that she looked really cute she grabbed her school bag and walked down stairs to meet up with her friends.


-Down stairs-

"Akira is up and wake." Momoko smiled and looked at the two at the table eating while she herself was in the kitchen cooking foods for her and Akira. "It seems like it but I don't hear her footsteps at all." Kiyomi explained and looked at the food in front of her, then looked at her two friends. "Whose footsteps do you not here?" Akira asked appearing out of nowhere (but really just got into the dining room). "W-w-where did you come from Akira," Kiyomi somewhat stuttered and falling out of her chair onto the floor. "Well good morning Akira. I see your wearing the school uniform and didn't toss it out the window." Momoko smiled from her spot in the kitchen. "Yeah. I almost did Momoko, but I think it looks cute on me, wouldn't you think the same." Akira twirled in her outfit and stopped when she saw Kyoko. The non-speaking girl was sitting at the dining table not even paying attention to anyone in the room. "What's the matter with Kyoko?" the raven hair girl asked and sat down at the table. Momoko brought both of their food and sat down too. Kiyomi finally got off the floor and did the same.

There was a silence in the room till Kiyomi broke it by saying, "well this is lovely." "Well it wouldn't be so quite, if someone told me why Kyoko is so sad." Akira explained. Then the silence was back for 30 seconds until Momoko stated "well this morning Kyoko got a text from her boyfriend and it seems like they broke up." To Akira, Momoko sounded very sad. She could fell a dark aura in the room and she looked over at Kyoko. Yes, there it was the dark aura that Akira felt just a minute ago, but she couldn't help to wonder why Kyoko was so mad. Well her boyfriend did just brake up with her. "I need to go get my sword and kill that asshole," Akira mumbled trying not to let anyone hear her but it seems like that didn't work at all. "AKIRA, if you think that killing someone that has no reason to be killed then stop thinking about it now," Momoko said in an every motherly tone that scared the crap out of the three girls. "I wasn't planning on killing anyone Momoko. I was just thinking how nice it is outside today," Akira laughed nervously. She knew Momoko wouldn't fall for it. So she had to distract the dirty-blonde before she got a lecture.

It was a gift from god, because the door bell rang at that moment. All the girls looked at each other then bolted out of their seats and ran to the door.


-A few hours before-

"So why are we here again leader?" Kakuzu asked try to figure out why the entered the real world. "It's because your stupid partner said that there are five girls that have high chakra in this world." Pien answered and looked at the map in his hands. He was trying to find Akira's house (he knows where the house is, he just doesn't know how to read the map). "And why would you listen to that idiot," Kakuzu stated very meanly. "I'm not an idiot you motherfucker," Hidan yelled at his partner. And they started to yell back and forth and everyone watched to see if they would kill each other.

Konan, on the other hand, watch Pien fiddle with the map some more and then took it away from him. "How about we ask someone." The blue hair girl smiled and turned to an old lady who just happened to be passing by. And Konan ask her and the old lady told her which way. It seems like they were going in the right direction, then Konan thanked the women and went back to her friends.

When she walked back Kakuzu and Hidan were still fighting, so she did the smart thing and yelled at them, "WILL YOU TWO SHUT UP FOR ONCE AND NOT FIGHT." Then she walked away and head for the girl's house. The group looked at her then they started to follow her as well.

They finally got to the house and Konan stopped and saw a beautiful red brick three story house with black shutters and a dark purple front door it had a creepy looking oak tree in the front yard that made the house more beautiful than ever. She didn't even notice the group went ahead up to the door until Pien announced, "Konan, what are you doing and get your butt up here now." Konan broke the gaze on the house a walked up the path to the door and her group.

Everyone was talking and wondering what to do. Konan decided to go ahead and ring the door bell. She turned back around and looked at the group, they were quite even Hidan was quite. Pien was going to ring the door bell again until they all heard a loud crash and the sound for running feet. The Akatsuki members were confused and stayed quite so they could hear more of what was going on inside the house. Then Pien rand the door bell again and the door started to open.


-Back inside-

"Come on Akira. That was not fair at all and you know it." Kyoko whined. "Well I can see that you're back to normal and it is fair because I'm quicker than all of you. Hahaha," Akira laughed. "But why did you have to brake the lamp," Momoko asked and looked at the happy girl standing in front of the door. Akira was about to answer when the door bell rang again. All girls looked at each other and then turned to Akira. The raven hair girl was already opening the door then she stopped when the door was half open. She couldn't move, Akira was frozen in place. The other girls looked at Akira and wonder why she didn't open the door all the way. Momoko moved closer to Akira and opened the door all the way for they could see who was there.

No one in the house could move or speak because of who are in front of them. The Akatsuki members looked at the four girls standing at the door.

When Kiyomi saw Itachi standing in the back of the group with his stolid look on his face she was close from fainting that it wasn't even funny. Kyoko was another story but it was still the same because she was three minutes from fainting and she also got a noise bleed from seeing Deidara. Momoko started to hyperventilating from behind Akira from seeing Sasori and all of his puppet goodness (Akira never understood Momoko when it came to Sasori. In fact, Akira never really understood why she got her friends hooked on to Naruto in the first place.) But it seems like the only one out of the four girls who was not going gaga over the Akatsuki was Akira. Said girl broke out of her stage of shock and leaned against the door frame.

"Well good morning Pien," Akira smiled and stared at the man in front of her. He stared back at Akira like he's sense her before.


Me: ah so happy that I fixed this chapter *stretches*

Kanda: oh cares about you fixing the chapter.

Konan: a lot of people Kanda

Allen: ah and now Rosa is in the emo corner *looks at me*

Lavi: Yuu-chan did it *smiles*

Kanda: don't call me by my name *holds mugan to Lavi's neck*

Me: Kanda don't hurt Lavi *pulls mugan away from Lavi's neck and takes it from Kanda*

Kanda: *pissed*

Lenalee: please review and I hope these dorks become nicer

Akira: and hope you love me *smiles*

Momoko: *smacks Akira* shut up dork