OK! I am REALLY new at this and I expect mercy from all you good people ok? I mean, I like all fanfiction. Even though I'm a girl, I enjoy yaoi and I like everything people write. Unless it was a one liner or something. N-E-WAYZ, even though Vegeta is my all time favorite character i'm going to give all the characters their share in my stories ok? And I'll continue my story from here on out if I get good reviews. If this story sux, tell me and I'll start on another story.
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SLENDER STRANGER:Chapter1


Goten rolled over on his stomach.The club he went to with that girl last night, was more exciting than he had thought. He decided he wouldn't call her. He stretched and welcomed the warm rays of sun onto his back.
"I should train today" Goten changed into his gi and zipped downstairs. The heavenly smell of his mother's cooking hypnotized him as he eagerly waited at the table.He saw his father jumping from one foot to the other beside ChiChi.
"Uh, morning dad," He said. Goku continued to stare at the food with a dangerous look in his eye.
"Goku, you're going to have to wait, your son is doing a much better job containing himself than you are! Good heavens!" Goku gulped and tried to control the empty feeling in his abdomen. Ten seconds had passed and he was jumping up and down again.
"GOKU! If you keep distracting me, the food will come out all wrong!!" She screamed.
"Oh come on ChiChi, you always made the food good no matter what." He said
"So what? You expect me to do everything perfectly don't you?"
"No no no, that's not what I said!" He said frantically.
"Oh really?! And just what are you planning to do after yu finish eating Goku?!"
"Um go and spar with Vegeta?"
"Exactly, that's what you do almost everyday! Leaving me here to clean up your mess! Then what do I do next? I don't bother to talk to Bulma, she just gossips about things that have nothing to do with my opinion! I have to clean the house, your clothes, draw your bath and make another enormous lunch!!! I'm sick of it! And you aren't even romantic when I set up a candle light dinner! You practically ate the candles! If only Gohan was here. He is a doctor with all the degrees a person could get! And now Goten is unemployed because of your training! What do you have to say for yourself Goku?!!!!"
"Um is the food ready yet?" He asked innocently. Before ChiChi exploded , Goten and Goku zoomed out of the house towards Capsule Corp.
"That was a close one." Goten sighed.
"I hope Bulma has something to eat on the table."
"Ugh I don't even want to think about it! You know she can't cook."
"Yeah, I wonder how Vegeta, Bra and Trunks have managed to survive on her food."
"I think they buy pizza after Bulma leaves."
"Hmm. Did you feel that?"
"What dad?"
"It felt like a really strong ki, but it vanished!"
"Must be your stomach making you feel things."
"yeah, maybe."

Meanwhile a slender stranger spied them from a great distance. 'Their power is great and the older one is a full saiya-jin, but he is not the one I seek. Though he might prove to be very valuable' She said to herself.

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Veggie's House

"Dammit! Leave alone!"
"No! Not until you clean the mess in the kitchen!"
"WHAT?! You're the one who made the mess! You don't know how to cook and talk at the same time!!"
"WHAT?!!!!!" She screamed at the top of her lungs," You were the one who distracted me!"
"What are you talking about onna? You always burn the food!"
"If you hadn't talked to me while I was trying to flip the pancake then it wouldn't of gone flying and Trunks wouldn't have tripped over Bra's foot while trying to catch it and the table wouldn't of flipped over burying our children in syrup and milk!!!!!"
"It's not my fault you can't concentrate on flipping a damned pancake!"
"You stupid saiya-jin monkey! If your stomach wasn't such a black hole then I wouldn't have to flip so many pancakes and make all that mess!!!!"
"Well, you...ah..um..bah!" Vegeta gave up and went to clean the kitchen. It was no use fighting over it. He would lose anyway.Bulma smile triumphantly. Bra was cleaning the syrup off her boots.
"Stupid leather...so hard to clean! MOM!"
"What is it?"
"Can I have some money to buy new boots. These arew ruined."
"Yes yes, in a second. Can you get the door?"
Bra trudged to the door and looked through the peep hole. When she saw who it was she turned bright red and ran to her room.
"What's with Bra?" Goten asked Bulma.
"Don't know...come in Son-kun" She said cheerfully.
"ARE you here to train with Vegeta?"
"Uh, kinda. ChiChi kicked us out and we're hungry," said Goku clutching his stomach desperately.
"Well don't count on getting any, the baka-onna burned it and threw it all over the kitchen." Vegeta yelled from the kitchen, aggravated at the burnt panckae he was trying to scrape off the wall.
"Shut up oh mighty prince off CRAP! You were the one who caused me to burn it!!"

"Here we go again..."Trunks said as he entered the room. Goten flashed him a smile.
"Hey Trunks, wanna spar today? I need to catch up on my training"
"Sorry man, gotta go to an important meeting and I promised Marron I would show her around the company. I gave her the job as mt personal assistant."
"I thought you were gonna give Pan that job." Gopten wondered.
"Nope she's underage. Only 16. Marron is perfect. Plus she is my girlfriend and would kill me if I hired the girl who has had a crush on me for ages!"
"I see what you mean. Oh well! I guess I could spar with Bra or your dad and mine." Just then Bra came tumbling down the stairs with a huge smile on her face.
"I'll spar with you! I begged my dad to train me so I wiull be a worthy contender Goten-chan." She said excitedly.
"Uh ok" he said confused on how Bra was acting. Trunks snickered and headed towards the door.
"See ya, gotta pick up my golden haired angel." Trunks said suddenly stopping. Then Vegeta's scream could be heard, reacting to Trunks lovable remark. Trunks laughed and continued out the door.
"Let's go train, Goten-chan!"
"But I'm hungry.!"
"OK, we'll eat food first. I'll order pizza"

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The slender stranger watchged Trunks and the others closley. She eyed Trunks. 'Hmm, this boy is related to the one I seek. Once I capture the one I seek, I shall make him mine.' Arual licked her lips and stood up straight from her crouched position on the floor. Her long red ahir flowed down to her knees and her silver skin glowed in the darkness of her hiding spot.
'Once I release his hidden powers, the universe will be at my mercy and all men will be my slaves' She cackled and let herself be engulfed fully by the darkness of the pond near Capsule Corp.

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Shall I continue? You decide. Puh-leez be nice to me! I am a sensitive person emotionally and I need your support. If you don't like the story tell me in a mature way, although I do find those flames full of curse words very funny.
N-E-WAYZ what I'm saying is if you think I should continue tell me, I promise you it will get interesting ok?