Ok this is gona be my first fic that I really put everything into it well hear goes!

This takes place after the one episode where Misty danced with Ash with her hair down (and that's my fav episode too :)) and Brock left to go somewhere but Ash and Misty don't care Words like this "what's going on" are there thoughts

Ash after the dance: "Wow I never knew how much I like Misty till now."
Misty: Hay Ash!!
Ash: ...
Misty: ASH HELLO!?!?!? ANYONE HOME?!?!?
Ash: Huh, uh no.
Misty: I can believe that.
Ash: HAY!!!
Misty: Ha ha ha
Ash: Hay where's Brock?
Misty: Oh he told me he was going out with some girl.
Ash: No way!
Misty: I know I wonder what kind of girl she is but I'm sure she's not human!
Ash and Misty starts to laugh
Ash: "I don't know why I didn't felt like this about Misty before I never noticed I like her."
Misty: "What's rough with him he doesn't seem the same. It's like he's in deep thought."
Ash: "But she'll never like me the only reason she's fowling me is because I killed her bike..."
Misty: Hay Ash anything wrong?
Ash: Huh what did you say Mist?
Misty: Mist??
Ash: Huh?
Misty: You called me Mist. Why?
Ash: I don't know
Misty: You never called me that before
Ash: Well (He's blushing)
Misty: Well....
Misty: Did he just realize I love him? I hope not. Or does he like me?
Ash: So is Brock staying away for good? I hope.
Misty: You hope! Isn't he your friend!!
Ash: Yes but...never mind
Misty: No tell me Ash!
Ash: No you'll leave.
Misty: Never.
Ash: Ok promise?
Misty: Yep.
Ash: Ok well Misty...I...I...
Misty: You what?
Ash: I love you Mist.
Misty: What?
Ash: Ok you don't like me like I like you. You don't have to leave I will. Bye Misty.
Misty: NO ASH!
Ash: No don't try to make me feel better.
Misty: But Ash I LOVE YOU TOO!!
Ash: Really?????? No way?!?!
The end of part one.

Ok tell me if I suck or rock with my first fic and I'm in sorta a writers block well tell me if I'm starting things ok ok?