A/N ths is my first story so be a little nice but still voice your opinion and please review also it has been changed a little bit but nothing major just made the fight with Garth longer and more even and changed Andrew's size and fur color so read on
Andrew's POV
As I walk through the valley, I can sense a tension, which is odd considering I am alone as far as I know... But even though I'm alone, I still keep my senses on extreme alert since I never know what to expect with new packs. Some are... unpredictable to say the least, but I'm hoping that if this pack is that way, couldn't be too evil or "kill happy" can they? I chuckle to myself as that thought goes across my mind. They were both the least opposing wolves ever! How could they do any damage?
Garth's POV:
As I do my duty of searching this side of the territory while Candu, Hutch and Kate check the other sides of it, I think to myself absentmindedly about how beautiful the day was and how much I would rather be spending the day with my beautiful omega mate, Lilly, and how Kate is probably thinking the same about that stupid coyote Humphrey... "Wait! Was I really just thinking that? Humphrey isn't stupid! He's my friend," I thought to myself. So I just shrug it off. Then in a second, I snap back to reality because I hear some rustling in the bushes ahead. I go into a crouching position and creep towards the bush and as I peer through it, I see a wolf the a little bigger then humphrey with jet black fur, a grey underbelly, grey paws and golden eyes. He looks tense and ready for anything, so I decide I'm going to give him something to deal with and see what he can do and I can't help but think that this fight will be over quickly with me being on the winning side.
Back to Andrew's POV:
While I walk, I start thinking about what happened that night... The night I lost them. That was such a terrible night, but I snap from my train of thought when I am pounced on by a wolf the same size as me. The wolf had red fur and a cream colored underbelly, from what I could see. I am surprised by this sudden attack. I quickly recollect myself and kick the wolf off. The wolf rolls to the side and gets up into an attack stance. As I do the same, the wolf charges at me, claws and teeth at the ready but I dodge and push him away from me and get ready to counter attack. As I get prepare, I see that he is dazed so I start charging at him. When I'm about five feet away, I stand up on my hind legs and ball my left forepaw into a fist, bringing it up into his jaw hoping to hit it. It does... It connects to him square in the jaw and sends him into a backflip. Then he is sent landing on the ground with a thud. "Hmmm. Well you were pretty easy to take down, but why your so much bigger then me" I say out loudbut before I can start thinking why to do with him he starts to get up "god damn it" I think he quickly gets up and charges at me I try tododge but he hits me in the chest with his paw balled up into a fist. I am slightlSoninkes by this hit but before I can recover I am hit multiple times again in the chest by him on the 3rd punch I grab his fist and wrench his arm to the side and hit him in the face a couple times he staggers back and gets ready to return the hit.
Kate's POV:
As I walk around the valley looking for Garth to help him cover the rest of the territory, I start thinking on how patrolling is a waste of time. No pack is tepid enough to attack the giant united pack, are they? I mean, they would be destroyed by sheer numbers and force. While I am still thinking to myself, I am suddenly wrenched from my thoughts as I hear the sounds of snarling and fighting wolves. Then I hear a thud and someone saying something but all I got was, "You were easy." It sounds like a male's voice and I don't recognize it so I turn the corner to look. I see a wolf fighting Garth so I get into a charging position and as quietly as possible start charging at the wolf. When I'm about seven feet from him, I jump into the air, ready to tackle him and hopefully knock him down.
Andrew's POV:
As I think of what to with the red wolf to stop him from attacking, I am pulled from my train of thought as I am hit from behind and knocked out. I regain consciousness long enough to see a tan furred wolf standing near a snow white wolf who seemed to be saying something to the red wolf. But he doesn't respond he just looks at me with anger in his eyes and I try to respond but I'm to dazed to. Then I notice two gray wolves coming towards me and when they get to me, they grab my legs and drag me somewhere. I could not tell where because my vision became blurry and I again lost consciousness soon after that.
A/N so how was it? And first off i have to give someone something *grabs bag full of notes that say thank you* here you go HLK * turns over bag above HLK's head and dumps them on him* for those of you wondering why he gets thanks its because he basically helped me get this off the ground and I have to say thank you to everyone who submitted names for the andrew OC and I might use some names suggested for OC's later on so that's it and please please please review
