Chapter:1

The wind was blowing faster, and there was no end to the darkness. The mist was crawling against the surface creeping closer to me. I could not scream no matter how hard I tried. Soon the mist was at my feet and I couldn't move. It was crawling up my leg so delicately and I could feel my legs numbing until I couldn't feel anything. It was slowly creeping up my body until it covered all of me. I was so cold, and it was so dark, only the light of the mist was there for me. I was numb all over and could hardly breathe. I tried to move something but I was so numb I couldn't feel any part of me move. All of a sudden there was a sound. A very low sound that seemed to be coming from the direction I was facing. As the sound got closer the mist seemed to start retreating down my body. It started to get warmer and warmer as the sound got closer. Light started appearing and I moved closer to it. All of a sudden I was over come with heat and light, it was blinding. I went to walk closer, then, everything went black.

Please don't be cruel. I'm not really good at this kind of stuff so, to me though I think it's pretty good. I'm not going to write anymore until you review!