What's up guys its Steelmoore2 back with a rewrite of chapter 1 I'm not gonna do a shoutout in this chapter soooo sorry y'all
Third person perspective
Allen wakes up to his alarm clock after having a restless night, he had just moved to Jasper City, Canada after his parents Brock and Janice won the lottery. Now you may think that they are his real parents but their not, in fact him and his little sister Stacy are adopted. they both lost their parents back when they were very young, the office building both of them worked at collapsed out of no where and ended up killing them and 5 other people, it caused 10more people to be severely injured and a couple became completely crippled by this accident. Brock and Janice were old friends of their parents and ended up adopting them after it all happened.
He hits the button on his alarm clock and sits up in the bed looking at the dresser that sits next to it and opening the little fridge that's installed in it, he grabs a bottle of water and chugs it down shaking his head and making a noise that sounded like Jaba the Hut from Star Wars and then throwing the bottle in the trash can on the other side of the room and getting up. He walks over to his closet and grabs a black Hanes T-shirt and jeans of the same brand. He grabs his socks from another drawer and then goes into the bathroom that's in his room and sets his clothes on the counter walking over to the shower and turning the handles making the water shoot out as he pulls off his boxers he slept in and goes over to the counter opening up the last box he had to unpack and grabbing his body wash and shampoo and then back over to the shower stepping in and sighing as the luke warm water runs over his black and green fur.
After his shower he steps out and gets dressed going out of the bathroom and grabbing his phone keys and wallet from the nightstand and then walking over to his door an opening it to see his sister already dressed and ready to go, she was wearing a pair of pink camouflage jeans and a pink shirt that says 'I'm a princess on it and she went past his room and headed down the stairs to the kitchen with him right behind her. They make it into the kitchen to see Janice cooking breakfast and Brock sitting at the table drinking coffee and reading the newspaper like every morning, guess some things don't change. Allen sits down at the table and Janice sets a plate down in front of him and kisses his cheek making a small smile appear on his face as he starts to eat his eggs. Stacy looks to her mom and says "Why did we have to move to freaking Canada again, I loved where we used to live" as Janice turns around and looks at her saying "Your only saying that because you didn't want to leave that boy you had a giant crush on, what was his name...Jack" in a smart tone making Stacy's cheeks catch fire and she stood up and said "I didn't have a crush on him" making everyone in the room laugh.
Allen finished his breakfast and stood up saying "I'm heading out early, gotta be a show off with my car like usual" He said heading to the front door and going to the garage, he put in the code and the door slowly opened revealing his 1967 Chevrolet Camaro SS with a glossy black full body paint job and a thick lime green stripe going down the middle of the car, to match his fur. He walked along side the beauty running his hand across the side as he walked towards the driver door and stuck the key in the lock and turning it to the left making it unlock as he grabbed the chrome handle and opened the door. He sat down in the seat and stuck the key in the ignition tuning it to the right and making the custom engine fire and roar to life in the early morning hours.
He put the car in reverse and backed out of the garage hitting the v=button on the visor and hutting the garage door. He backed out at a left angle and and then popped the clutch dropping the car into first and accelerating slowly down the road. He got out of the community and turned to the right taking him straight to the highway for the 20 minute drive to school. He pulled up to a stop light a few minutes later and to his right was a 1985 Corvette C4, he rolled down the window and looked into the topless Corvette and said "Hey, you up for a race" while revving the engine. The grey wolf inside the car revved his beefy 375hp engine and nodded. The both sit at the stoplight having and engine war waiting for it to turn green.
The light switches to green and both of them take off with Allen's car popping off the front tires taking advantage of the wheelie bar on the back and quickly surpassing the Vette at a much higher speed. The driver of the Vette tries to keep up for the next quarter mile before coming to a hard stop making a loud screech, making Allen look into the rearview and seeing him slowed down quite a bit just as blue and red lights start flashing behind him, he sighs and slowly pulls off the road with the police officer pulling up behind him an getting out of his car. "Is there a problem officer" Allen ask as the Vette drives past and the grey wolf mouths the words 'I'm sorry' as he goes past and heads off.
"What the fuck Humphrey" a small tan wolf in the passenger seat of the Vette yells next to him making him sigh slightly and say "What Kate, it sounded like fun" with a cheeky grin on his face and she huffs "Don't fucking do that while I'm in the car" she growled at him making him slightly whimper and say "Okay I wont damn" and then continue on to school, a few minutes after Humphrey and Kate arrive at the school they hear a loud roar and look at the entrance to the parking lot and see, the Camaro and Humphrey throws down his drink and says "Damnit he must be new here" then sighs looking at the ground at his now destroyed Dr. Pepper and then sighing again as Kate giggles at his actions.
Allen's POV
"Wow first day and I already have a ticket" I laugh while finishing my commute to school. I pull into the school parking lot roaring my engine and making a ton of kids look over to me...including the guy I raced. I grin and park next to him, shutting off the engine and getting out of the car. I look at him and he smiles and walks over to me extending his hand and saying "I'm Humphrey and she is Kate my girlfriend" as a tan and very beautiful wolf walks up behind him and wraps her arms around him giving him a kiss on the cheek and saying "I'm gonna head inside, I have cheer practice" and he nods as she lets go and walks up to the doors meeting with a bunch of girls and laughing almost instantly as I turn back to Humphrey and say "I'm Allen, I just moved here" and he nods and walks the side of my car and says "What's under the hood of this monster" and I grin opening the driver side door and popping the hood, as he opens the hood and props it up, it reveals my 6.2 liter V8 triton engine with a Armageddon turbo system adding 8psi and 236hp along with a brand new edition to the car, a nos fogger system. "Damn" he says looking at it in awe
"Now did I say it was stock" I say with a chuckle and he shake his head no and looks over to me "Where did you get this car from" I look at my baby and say "I built her from the ground up, as a dedication to someone close to me" and once again he looks at awe and smiles "Damn good job bro" and I smile as three other wolves walk up to us and the small and slim one says "What's up Humphrey" he looks over to them and says "Hey guys this is Allen, Allen this is Shakey, Salty and Mooch, they've been my friends for a lifetime" I smile and greet them as they all start to look at the car giving it compliments and admiring my handiwork with the car after telling them the condition I found it in at the junkyard when I was 13, that's when I first started to restore the car in honor of my dad. The 1967 Camaro was his favorite car and now I have one because of him and I love it.
After a few more minutes of chatting and hanging out the bell rings alerting us its time to go to class, the trio head in before me and Humphrey. "So where do I get my schedule and everything?" I ask as me and him start to head in "Follow me, ill show you around everything" he says with a smile and I thank him as we head into the front door of the school and I look over to my right and see that the cafeteria is almost right next to the entrance, I look around at my fellow student but one in particular catches my eye and I open my mouth at her beauty. She was pure white, almost like snow and wearing some...revealing clothes that just made it even better. A set of fingers snap in front of my face and I shake my head coming out of the trance I was in and look at Humphrey who was bent over laughing "Looking at Lilly are we" he says and I blush and say "NO!" and he stars to laugh harder
I blush harder and he says "Well shes taken already by the football star of the school, so you can probably be friends with her but nothing else" I look at him and nod as we walk to a nearby office and I get my schedule and binder for class. "Oh hey, we have the same first class together" he says and I smile and follow him to the classroom, we arrive a few minutes later and I look around the room and notice that Lilly was in this class and once again I got caught admiring her until she turned and looked at me, she blushed and so did I
Lilly's POV
"Ooohh looks like the new boy is eyeing you Lilly" Candy said to me and I turned around and saw him doing it, a blush started to show through my white fur and he turned around quickly and looked away from me and started talking to Humphrey and a couple other guys again. They all punched him in the arm and then laughed at him as he looked back at me quickly then turned away again, I realized exactly how cute he was at that moment and then a hand waved in front of my face as I shook my head and realized I was staring at him "Earth to Lilly" Candy said as I blushed harder and she giggled and said "Are you staring at the new boy" and I huffed and said "No I was not, I already have an amazing boyfriend" and that made Janice and Reba giggle along with her as my white fur turned completely red and I looked away from them and to the back of the classroom.
"alright students settle down" the teacher said as he walked into the classroom. All of the kids in the room became quite almost instantly and he said "Boys to the back of the room, girls at the front, in this class you will have assigned seats and table partners, is the understood" we all said yes and he started putting girls down at tables, he got to me and assigned me to table 11, I sat down in my seat and he finished up with the girls and then started with the boys I heard him say a name I didn't recognize and heard the new kid say yes "Allen Wolferson, you will be at table 11 with Lilly" he said and my heart dropped and stated to pound against my chest, why wa I feeling like this, I didn't even feel like this when I first met Garth.
Allen's POV
"Allen Wolferson, you will be at table 11 with Lilly" the teacher said and I swear my heart skipped a beat as I said yes sir and went over to the table keeping my attention anywhere else but on her. I looked at all the other students in the classroom and then ended up looking at her and my heart was pounding so fast my chest was actually hurting. Well this is a good way to start off the school year I think to myself as we both get caught in a stare at each other, straight into the eyes.
Well I hope you guys loved the rewrite of my first chapter of JHSR, I would like to dedicate this chapter to a friend of mine that suggested I rewrite it, I am not gonna say her name because she is not on fanfiction, but thank you for the advice little wolfy and I hope that everyone enjoyed this chapter but like usual remember to
HAVE NICE DAY
