Story contains Dumbledore bashing, abused harry, rape, betrayal, slash good Draco parsel tongue and probably many other things that I haven't thought of yet as well as possibly really bad writing like I said in the summary I suck at writing anything that isn't a poem (or an essay) I'm not good with long plots and tend to rush things so if someone has ideas, constructive criticism or wants to help keep me in line when I try to rush things it would be appreciated. However if you don't have any advice on how to improve the story and just wand to bash my writing don't bother I'll just ignore what you write cus like I said I already know I can't write stories reiterating that is not going to improve my writing or convince me not to write
