ok this is the COMPLETELY(for real this time) revised version, characters are being changed and this whole first chapter is changing.

Disclaimer:sigh I own absolutely nothing...

summary:

Makino Ruki's older sister lives with their father. They used to be very close and kept in touch but what happens when she decides to visit her little sister on her birthday?
Ch.1 Ruki's birthday

"I swear Keiji is head over heals for you."

"I'm not so sure I should believe you," said a girl of about 17. She had straight layered dark brown hair that reached mid-back and dark brown eyes. Her dark brown eyes were narrowed into slits. Why did everyone have to get involved with EVERYTHING?

"Why not?"

"Because you have a tendency to lie about certain things," the girl said as she propped the phone on her shoulder so she could finish french braiding her friend's hair.

"Why would I lie about something like this? You and Keiji are two of my best friends!" 'LIAR LIAR LIAR!' The girl chanted in her head.

"Ok, Toshi, I believe you." 'Like hell I do,' she thought.

"Good! Well I guess I'll talk to you later."

"K! Bye!" She hung up the phone and tossed it aside on her bed. Sometimes Toshi was just too much to handle.

Ruki sat at her desk staring at the clock. 'Come on, hurry! Let the bell ring already!' Ruki thought as she looked aroung the class room. Takato and Juri were passing notes back and forth to each other, Kazu was asleep and drooling on his desk (gross), Jenrya was reading, Kenta was also asleep, and Alice was staring off into space.

RINGRING

"Finally!" Ruki said as she stood from her desk. It was Friday and all the students were eager to get home. Although the truth was most of them wouldn't.

"That is sick," Alice said as Kazu lifted his head to reveal the whole right side of his face was covered in his drool.

"What's sick?" Kazu asked as he slowly started to realize school had just ended. Alice rolled her eyes and decided it would be more fun to let Kazu humiliate himself. The other tamers just laughed. "WHAT'S SO FUNNY!"

"Nothing Kazu nothing at all." Takato said with a smirk. With that the tamers went their separate ways and headed home. It was just too easy to laugh at him.

The next day

"I wouldn't be surprised if they all forgot my birthday," Ruki said to herself as she climbed out of bed, 'It's not like I care anyways,' she added in her head. She walked out into the living room of her house.

"SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY RUKI!"

Ruki noticed all the tamers were there including Suzy, Ai and Mako, but the one person she hoped would be there wasn't... Ryo.

"And where the hell do you think you're going?" A middle aged man looked at his seventeen year old daughter.

"Out, now back off old man," The girl only glared at him. These occurrences were normal and only made the young girl hate her father even more.

"You have enough fucking nerve to talk to your father like that?" The man lifted his fist.

Outside a young man heard the shouting. He knew instantly what was happening and rushed to the door. He had gotten there just in time to block the father's fist. The young man lifted his knee into the father's crotch and grabbed the daughter's arm.

"You alright?" Ryo finally asked once the two were inside his car.

"Yeah. The old man's probably still hung over from last night," The girl said nonchalantly.

"You know Yumi, you should really get out of there." Yumi merely shrugged her shoulders, her fights with her father were a daily occurrence, and so were these talks about how she should really get away from her father. She didn't really have much of a choice but to stay, where else would she go? She was still a high school student, she didn't have a job, and she would have no where to sleep at night. Right now it seemed that staying with her father would be the best option open to here.

Woo! First re-revised chapter done! Leave comments.