EAT CERO AND DIE - REVISITED

I've revisited and rewritten my fan fiction 'Eat Cero and Die' with the help of my friend. For those who read the last version of this one, not much has changed. Only the character's name, look, plot... and a few other bits. But it's better than the last one (I hope it is)!

The summary doesn't sound interesting at all, does it? Basically its about two OC characters who gets into the series Bleach, literally, and tries to survive. At least (skim) read, if you have to, and review! That would be much appreciated.

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach. And if I did there would be more chapters focusing on the Espadas, tyvm. I do own the OC characters: Kaye Persona and Rie Vanille.


I warily picked up my pace and caught up with Kaye as we recklessly walked towards our fate.

"I hear they're replacing the park with a not-so-big apartment block. Some rich people are funding the construction and said it to be done in a month that way they can live there or something like that," Kaye blabbed on as she rolled her light blue eyes.

"Jeez!" I scoffed as I shoved my hands into the pockets of my black denim shorts. "Why would they want to live in this plain and empty neighborhood of Crinkles anyways?"

"Beats me. Crinkles is a cool as street and all but couldn't they ruin another park elsewhere?" she cocked her head to the right making her long chestnut hair flow along. I merely shrugged. We merrily walked to the now-forgotten and soon-to-close park just down the road from my house. The summer heat was beating down at us and the lull wind gushes pass my blue black pony tail and Kaye's teal dress. It was a great day but that didn't help to how I was feeling on the inside.

"Here we are."

We reached the secluded park with red tape lines going across it. No one was there and it's basically been abandoned for a couple of weeks now. Everything in the park was lonesome, the swings, the slides, the spinning monkey bars and even the see-saw: the place where me and Kaye met and played most of our childhood times on. It was all in stable shape but it missed the warmth of happiness and laughter on it.

"Hey Rie," Kaye snapped me back to reality. "Race you to the see-saw?" she smirked.

"Fine. Ready set go!" I quickly yelled as I made a dash straight to the finish line. I could hear Kaye running up to catch me while yelling "you cheater" out loud. I jumped up on one side of the see-saw and Kaye jumped on the other a second later.

"Slooooow pooooke!" I poked my tongue out and pushed myself up making her go down and bounce slightly. We both giggled and laughed amongst one another. At this very playground was where we shared our first meeting and childhood times together. And from then on we've developed the same interest, liked the same styles of clothes, loved the same music...

"Could you believe how epic this week's chapter in Bleach was?"

Oh, and did I mention our same overly-obsessive love to Bleach?

"That shit, was ah-freakin-mazing! Aizen just became god right thurr!" I squealed. We were fans of Japanese manga and anime but what we were obsessing-fan-girls on was the series Bleach by the author Kubo Tite. We love the characters, the story, the art - we love all of it to boring-bits! Once we start discussing about Bleach it's almost never-ending.

"They have got to change the title for each chapter though..." grumbled Kaye as she sways down the see-saw.

"Agreed. The title doesn't even make sense anymore! Deci-" a sudden rush of vibrating sound emitted in the air making my ears crack. I clenched my ears and hopped off the seat. I could hazily see Kaye already on the ground in a ball form grasping her ears tight. Where was this annoying noise coming from? My eyes couldn't open as I focused my strength into shutting down my ears from hearing the noise. Seconds later it stopped. I slowly opened my eyes and discarded my hands away from my swollen ears. I looked to the side of me to check if Kaye was all right.

"R-Rie! You all right?" she cried out to me.

I gave her a slight nod, "Are you?" she nodded back. I scanned around the playground and the road to see if anyone triggered something that might have caused that unusual feeling. Nothing.

"Oh my g... what the heck. Rie look!" Kaye pointed behind and I swiftly turned around to find a ripping two-meter dash across the fabric of reality.

"Holy sh...it." It was unbelievable. There was a black stitched line formed onto nothingness on the other side of the see-saw was and I can honestly tell it wasn't there before. It was emitting a vibrating buzz which I presumably guessed was where the irritating noise came from. Kaye unthinkably climbs over the see-saw and walks up closer to that thing.

"Kaye you douche! What are you thinking!" I whisperingly yelled as I cautiously followed behind her hoping not to cause a reaction to the mysterious fragment.

"Oi, this might sound stupid - but doesn't this look like the Garganta… from Bleach?" she questioned.

"Yeah your right, that sounds stupidly stupid. Now get away from that and let's get out of here!"

"No no, look! It does right?" I helplessly sighed and approached it a step closer. I tilted my head to the side, then the other side. It, actually does look slightly, could be, possibly, maybe, like the Garganta. But what are the odds!

"I'm telling you it is! LOOK!" Kaye unthinkably shoves her hands in and pushes the ripped dash vertically stretching it open. I instinctively ducked away and realized nothing came popping out like what always happens in most thriller movies. I crept in closer and denied the whole idea of it possibly being Bleach's Garganta. Kaye takes a step inside the realm.

"Are you retarded! Don't go in there!"

"Oh come on, its fine!" Kaye grabs me by the wrist and drags me inside with her. The air felt awfully heavy in there but that didn't matter since the wonders of it all practically took my breath away. It was an endless move of black starry space with no boundaries all around. I looked down and noticed that a floating and slightly transparent cyan-blue ground was what we were standing on.

"K-Kaye, we have got to go!" I turned back but the sunny park in which we came from was missing and perhaps had gotten consumed by the realm, meaning no exit.

"Rie, Rie!" Kaye tugged at the end of my sleeveless peach shirt. "Look what I can do to the floor!"

"This is no time to-" she took a step forward and particles out of nowhere began to build the next path two inches away from the toes of her foot. She took another careful step and more cyan particles would quickly add on to the floating path.

"Let's go, Rie!" cheered Kaye as she continued to walk on the only path of this realm. I helpless sighed knowing that whatever I say to Kaye will go through one ear and out the other. I took my first step on the path and its smoothness created a friction against my bulky, short black boots and had crafted a squeak. The pathway seemed stable but I still had my doubts about this place and no way was I giving in on the idea of it being the Garganta. I warily picked up my pace and caught up with Kaye as we recklessly walked towards our fate.