Andrew Biersack sat at his desk, once again writing lyrics and day dreaming that he was a superstar. He began to sing under his breath, it was one of his teacher's pet hates, but he was stuck in his daydream world at the moment. "I cannot hide, what's on my mind, I feel it burning deep inside." Andy jumped and let out a loud yelp as the wooden ruler smacked across his knuckles. "Andrew Dennis Biersack. Detention, after school." Andrew sighed loudly, his shoulders visibly slumping "Yes Mr. Fallen"
Andy hated after school detentions. He could deal with missing his lunch and recess breaks for a detention, but after school detentions took away the time with the few friends he had. School had finished over an hour ago and Andrew was leaving only now. "Man, practice time is up. I missed it completely." Andrew's phone rang "Hey Ash, sorry I couldn't make it today. I guess my teacher's right huh? I'll never make it big, I'll probably finish my life as a hobo." "Dude... That's depressing... But anyway, WE HAVE A CHANCE TO BE SIGNED!" Andy was stunned "How?" "We need to have a demo CD ready in three days." "But Chris quit. We don't have a drummer" "We're getting signed with Coma Records, Cristian Coma is gonna be our drummer!" "Be there soon dude!" Andy almost squealed at the news as he hung up and ran to Ashley's house. "Dude where is he?" Christian exited the kitchen "Hey man, which one are you?" "A-Andy Biersack" Andy bit his lip and inwardly cursed at himself for stuttering "Christian Coma. Call me 'CC' if ya want." Chris smiled and shook Andy's hand "So now we're waiting on Jinxx" Andrew squealed "He's here! Oh my god I'm fangirling." He hid his face with shame and Christian came over and kissed his head. "Lighten up Sugar" Jinxx walked into the room. "Hello, the name's Jeremy Ferguson. Call me Jinxx, 'cause I hate Jeremy." He smiled and shook Christian's hand. "Christian Comma, or 'CC'" "Alrighty then, let's see how much work we need to do to get us signed. My dad's a tough critique. He told me that he wouldn't let me being here persuade his choice. We gotta blow doors down baby." All four boys nodded.
So what do you guys think? Is this where it finishes? Or do I get reviews and continue the story?
