Death aboard the Black Wind
chapter 1
piracy with pride
I am the great! I am the proud! captain john wolf! I shouted as I
entered the bar. Just then the music stopped and all eyes were
gazing towards me. Ummmm..... I said. Who said that? As i approached
the bar a fair maiden smiled towards me. Hello I said. I am john wolf
and you are?
Selena she replied. Ah Selena such a beautiful name really it is.
I'm feeling a little bit thirsty. Look you have a drink. Don't mind
if I do. Just then I noticed two men approaching me. Well hello there
I said. But you to aren't here for talk are you? Your here to harm me
then? No one touches Selena and gets away with it they shouted with
a look of enragement. Do you have a shilling I could borrow lads?
Do you take us for a fool? you just want to steal our gold you dirty
pirate!
Well I was just asking because remember I am a pirate! Quickly
they checked their pockets. The lil' weasel stole our money!
But of coaurse I did I'm a pirate! Now I bid you adue!
Gabby now! I shouted. Got your back john! As she hurled a giant
bag of folur towards us it exploded once in cotact with the floor.
As it exploded we made our escape.
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This is my first story so please comment on this chapter.
chapter 1
piracy with pride
I am the great! I am the proud! captain john wolf! I shouted as I
entered the bar. Just then the music stopped and all eyes were
gazing towards me. Ummmm..... I said. Who said that? As i approached
the bar a fair maiden smiled towards me. Hello I said. I am john wolf
and you are?
Selena she replied. Ah Selena such a beautiful name really it is.
I'm feeling a little bit thirsty. Look you have a drink. Don't mind
if I do. Just then I noticed two men approaching me. Well hello there
I said. But you to aren't here for talk are you? Your here to harm me
then? No one touches Selena and gets away with it they shouted with
a look of enragement. Do you have a shilling I could borrow lads?
Do you take us for a fool? you just want to steal our gold you dirty
pirate!
Well I was just asking because remember I am a pirate! Quickly
they checked their pockets. The lil' weasel stole our money!
But of coaurse I did I'm a pirate! Now I bid you adue!
Gabby now! I shouted. Got your back john! As she hurled a giant
bag of folur towards us it exploded once in cotact with the floor.
As it exploded we made our escape.
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This is my first story so please comment on this chapter.
