K so i made a story like this before but i decided it was bloody awful and am now remaking it.
Also i DO own the new character being introduced so please don't steal him!
Chapter 1
Cloud Strife was driving home to midgar on his motorcycle.
"why the hell did i name this hunk of bolts fenrir?" thought cloud.
A ShinRa Black-hawk helicopter flew over head with its door open and a red haired man sitting inside.
"hmm, he doesn't look like any ShinRa operative I've ever seen" thought cloud.
Cloud didn't give it to much thought at the time and just kept driving home. Before to long he was in the slums parking his bike in the new garage that had just been built.
He parked the bike and went in the bar to get something to eat. He spoke to tifa for awhile and ate his food. The food was always good at tifa's bar but it was especially good tonight. satisfied with the food he had just eaten he went to take a shower and go to bed. After he had showered and used a whole half bottle of conditioner in his hair, he went to his room (they had added actual rooms in the hideout) and went to sleep. as he lay there waiting for sleep to take him he thought back to the man in the helicopter.
"hmm, I wonder if that man was in SOLDIER? Nah couldn't have been. still he didn't look like your typical schmo. Eh whatever he was probably just some ShinRa brain."
The next morning cloud woke up later than usual, he got up got dressed and went to see if Barret had any jobs for him today.
"YO! Spiky!" said Barret.
"Hi ya, got any jobs for me today?" asked cloud.
"As a matter of fact I do!" said Barret.
"OK whats the job?" asked cloud.
"Its a dirty job, but i think you might be the only one who can do it." said Barret
"OK? What is it?" asked cloud.
"We need you to sneak into the SOLDIER floor with some hired muscle, and cause a ruckus" said Barret
"Ugh you do realize that there will be SOLDIER first class men there right?" asked cloud secretly worried.
"Yeah but you were first, Right?" asked Barret.
"Yeah thats Right" said cloud
...several hours later.
"OK, is everyone ready?" asked cloud to the ex ShinRa Infantry Corpsman he had with him.
"Yes Sir!" they all said in unison.
"Alright than, stick with me and we will make it out just fine!"
and with that they got of the elevator onto the 42nd floor and started shooting at the SOLDIERs. it was soon after the alarm had gone off that many mercenary started dying. It was then that the red haired man from the helicopter appeared. The other SOLDIER men seemed surprised but thrilled at his arrival. It could only mean one thing, he was a first.
And thats all for now! if you want to read the one i wrote poorly it is Called "My name is Legion" but i will probably delete it very soon so don't be surprised if you cant find it. Well, i will make another chapter soon. So please review i would greatly appreciate any input you could offer. Thanks! Till next time!
