Witch Hunter Robin (short story) Should I continue it? If so, how? Any
suggestions?
Robin quickly put on her glasses before letting her power consume her. She loved this feeling, this passionate fiery feeling, as if the very core of the earth was burning in her blood. She acted swiftly. Using her fire enhanced vision; she set fire around the man. The fire slowly engulfed him into a burning blaze as he was agonizingly killed.
The shot of a gun brought her out of her reverie. Then suddenly the world began to spin in front her eyes. Robin removed her glasses in hopes to stop the swirling colors in her eyesight. She wavered and felt herself getting ready to collapse before she felt arms around her. Then the world came to a stop. There were no spiraling objects in her gaze everything was as it was.
"Robin! Are you alright?" She heard Amon ask.
"Yes, yes, I'm fine. It was only the smoke." Robin made an excuse. Apparently he believed it for he let go of her, eyeing her suspiciously as she was a bit unsteady upon her feet. She was stopped by a stream of coughs.
"Maybe you should go home and get some rest." Karasuma suggested, "Here, I'll take you home." The 19 year old offered.
"No, I'll take her," Amon intervened, "You will be more useful here." And he promptly led a surprised Robin away from an equally surprised Karasuma and Sakaki.
Twice on the way home did Robin succumb to more coughing fits. Amon eyed her worriedly this time.
"Are you sure your alright?" He asked for the third time.
"Yes, I'm sure. It was only the smoke I assure you. I only inhaled too much." The 15-year-old witch responded. Deep down she knew the real reason. It was coming back, the disease that plagued her as a child. She had often been subject to such spells as a child. But the nuns had cured it right? Why was it coming back?
Thanks for reading. Should I continue it? Any suggestions on how? Well just submit a review. It would brighten my day.
Robin quickly put on her glasses before letting her power consume her. She loved this feeling, this passionate fiery feeling, as if the very core of the earth was burning in her blood. She acted swiftly. Using her fire enhanced vision; she set fire around the man. The fire slowly engulfed him into a burning blaze as he was agonizingly killed.
The shot of a gun brought her out of her reverie. Then suddenly the world began to spin in front her eyes. Robin removed her glasses in hopes to stop the swirling colors in her eyesight. She wavered and felt herself getting ready to collapse before she felt arms around her. Then the world came to a stop. There were no spiraling objects in her gaze everything was as it was.
"Robin! Are you alright?" She heard Amon ask.
"Yes, yes, I'm fine. It was only the smoke." Robin made an excuse. Apparently he believed it for he let go of her, eyeing her suspiciously as she was a bit unsteady upon her feet. She was stopped by a stream of coughs.
"Maybe you should go home and get some rest." Karasuma suggested, "Here, I'll take you home." The 19 year old offered.
"No, I'll take her," Amon intervened, "You will be more useful here." And he promptly led a surprised Robin away from an equally surprised Karasuma and Sakaki.
Twice on the way home did Robin succumb to more coughing fits. Amon eyed her worriedly this time.
"Are you sure your alright?" He asked for the third time.
"Yes, I'm sure. It was only the smoke I assure you. I only inhaled too much." The 15-year-old witch responded. Deep down she knew the real reason. It was coming back, the disease that plagued her as a child. She had often been subject to such spells as a child. But the nuns had cured it right? Why was it coming back?
Thanks for reading. Should I continue it? Any suggestions on how? Well just submit a review. It would brighten my day.
