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Things were not as peaceful as they used to be back in the 22nd centuary a man named

his son after a fictional character from a video game called Tiberium Dawn. but this

mans son grew up to be an evil man ironicly and had inspired a uprising in people, by the

28th centuary A planet was discovered harboring what has been referred to as the key to to

survival and humans had sent many researchers to find out as much as this object, when

carbondated what their resaults were, were kinda of minacing. It seemed that this weird

gem to existance was an alien artifact more than thirteen million years old, when they

did tests on it it still seemed to work. This device was later known as the genises device,

Only to the due note that this device could terraform a planet and seed it with primitive

life and animals within a matter of days or even hours sometimes. When humans than scoped

this technology for them selves, They became the best terraformers in the universe and

utilized this for a new goal for themselves. With the discovery of this artifact the human

race split into six fractions, but only four survived they were Kanes Kin, Dominiks Dyers,

The New Testament, and the clensers. The four fractions of the human race were at a war

of different goals. The New Testaments spreading the word of peace. Dominiks Dyers had

the goal to keep a military control over the population to bring it back into submission,

The cleansers to wipe out most of the humans in the galaxy to start again. And Kanes Kin

to control the galaxy, or even the universe. They all had their own followers from

different worlds as well though wanting the knowladge that humans had gained for themselves.

Some seen this as a good atempt to spread their empire. But mostly some hated the war and

wanted it to end. For some reason other worldy beings did not ever know much about certain

elements, like the unstable ones. The first empire to see humans drop a nuke thought

that every thing in the galaxy would die from the power they posessed. When the 31st

centuary came around and the war of the factions was still raging pretty bad, humans

learned how to make bases that were so coheasive to heat they could literly put a base

on a star. With that advancement humans were the strongest as far as strategic tech came.

Some aliens did not like this and got involed in what would become the great war or the

galactic struggle. Earth had world war 1,2,3,4,5,6,7, and even 8 but this would be known

as galaxy wars 1 because it was a galactic scaled war between 123,000 different races

but even out of those races, humans were still advanced in stratagies, population, and

military tech. By the time of the 43rd centuary and galaxy wars 1 still raging humans

came into the might of being able to destroy a whole entire solar system at once, with

though humans were fools, with the upcoming of this kind of tech, humans killed and

raged wars and even almost went extinct because of theire behavior and at the begging

of the 44th centuary a galaxy treaty was singed to end war between all races for the next

1,000 years now im going to tell you all that happened in the begging from my eyes,

because im the last one who had to sing the treaty. My race was almost destroyed because

of it's foolish desicions and im going to tell the story of what happened after in a

desperate hope to stop any sentient being from becoming destrucive like we did.

When the treaty was singed humans were no longer in fractions spread our in military

factions, we regained peace but when the treaty was singed I feared some one or something

would break the treaty and I was right.

Meh usual me small chapter, but I need people to review and tell me if I should change this story's domain (Starfox for ex or Sailormoon)