Please review as I may need ideas
Things were not as peaceful as they used to be back in the 22nd centuary a man named
his son after a fictional character from a video game called Tiberium Dawn. but this
mans son grew up to be an evil man ironicly and had inspired a uprising in people, by the
28th centuary A planet was discovered harboring what has been referred to as the key to to
survival and humans had sent many researchers to find out as much as this object, when
carbondated what their resaults were, were kinda of minacing. It seemed that this weird
gem to existance was an alien artifact more than thirteen million years old, when they
did tests on it it still seemed to work. This device was later known as the genises device,
Only to the due note that this device could terraform a planet and seed it with primitive
life and animals within a matter of days or even hours sometimes. When humans than scoped
this technology for them selves, They became the best terraformers in the universe and
utilized this for a new goal for themselves. With the discovery of this artifact the human
race split into six fractions, but only four survived they were Kanes Kin, Dominiks Dyers,
The New Testament, and the clensers. The four fractions of the human race were at a war
of different goals. The New Testaments spreading the word of peace. Dominiks Dyers had
the goal to keep a military control over the population to bring it back into submission,
The cleansers to wipe out most of the humans in the galaxy to start again. And Kanes Kin
to control the galaxy, or even the universe. They all had their own followers from
different worlds as well though wanting the knowladge that humans had gained for themselves.
Some seen this as a good atempt to spread their empire. But mostly some hated the war and
wanted it to end. For some reason other worldy beings did not ever know much about certain
elements, like the unstable ones. The first empire to see humans drop a nuke thought
that every thing in the galaxy would die from the power they posessed. When the 31st
centuary came around and the war of the factions was still raging pretty bad, humans
learned how to make bases that were so coheasive to heat they could literly put a base
on a star. With that advancement humans were the strongest as far as strategic tech came.
Some aliens did not like this and got involed in what would become the great war or the
galactic struggle. Earth had world war 1,2,3,4,5,6,7, and even 8 but this would be known
as galaxy wars 1 because it was a galactic scaled war between 123,000 different races
but even out of those races, humans were still advanced in stratagies, population, and
military tech. By the time of the 43rd centuary and galaxy wars 1 still raging humans
came into the might of being able to destroy a whole entire solar system at once, with
though humans were fools, with the upcoming of this kind of tech, humans killed and
raged wars and even almost went extinct because of theire behavior and at the begging
of the 44th centuary a galaxy treaty was singed to end war between all races for the next
1,000 years now im going to tell you all that happened in the begging from my eyes,
because im the last one who had to sing the treaty. My race was almost destroyed because
of it's foolish desicions and im going to tell the story of what happened after in a
desperate hope to stop any sentient being from becoming destrucive like we did.
When the treaty was singed humans were no longer in fractions spread our in military
factions, we regained peace but when the treaty was singed I feared some one or something
would break the treaty and I was right.
Meh usual me small chapter, but I need people to review and tell me if I should change this story's domain (Starfox for ex or Sailormoon)
