This is a rewrite of my older version of my story. I really hope that you guys enjoy this one a lot! Please read and review! Also favorite and follow too! - like what I did there, it rhymed haha! But seriously…Thanks and enjoy. PS I don't own NCIS or any of the characters other than our beloved Carmendy!

Chapter 1: Found

It all started out on a nice spring day. The one like they describe in books and movies. I was on my way home from my morning run. I knew that there was something wrong, just a gut feeling when I was turning to go onto my house's street. I mean, I knew that there was something about what was going to happen today that would be very different than usual. I ran into my driveway and went up to do my garage code when someone grabbed my shoulder from behind.

Might I mention to you that I am a so called "free time boxer" when I go to the gym, I mainly use the punching bag until my knuckles bleed. When I felt someone put their hand on me, my first reaction was to hit them. I turned around and swung my fist at someone's face and they were on the ground a split second later in a headlock.

"Federal Agents let him go!" Another man yelled out with a gun pointed to me. I knew I was in trouble, I had seen movies like this where the person assaulting a federal agent was arrested, usually for a pretty hefty amount of time. I let him go and put my hands in the surrender position, secretly freaking out on the inside. This was definitely something that had never happened before.

"Agents McGee and DiNozzo we have some questions for you" the pale younger man who had yelled at me said as he flashed his badge and ID.

"Anything. I'm really sorry about that, there has just been some interesting things going around here and I thought you were trying to kidnap me or something." I told them, helping the older, but still youngish looking man up off the ground. I grimaced looking at the giant red spot on his cheek that was surly going to be a bruise later on.

"No problem" He said told me, holding his jaw.

Rolling his eyes, the younger man spoke up. "Were going to need you to come with us. Just for questioning. This has nothing to do with your pretty awesome takedown over there"

I smiled and walked over to the car, silently laughing as I heard the man say "Nice to know teenage girls can still take you down DiNozzo."

Something inside my stomach turned and I knew something about this situation was not right. Something was going to happen. "Is your mother home by any chance?" The older man, who I now knew was Agent DiNozzo asked.

"I have no clue, it doesn't look like it, and there is no car in the driveway." I told them.

"Come with us inside." He replied.

Of course, I complied and walked back up to my house. I punched in the garage code and walked to the garage door. I looked around and realized that my mom's car was still here, however the car that her new 'friend' was using was not. I was very confused, because the car was supposedly broken down, as it was there this morning before I left, and I was only gone for about an hour.

I walked into the house and my stomach flipped again. I stood there while the two agents cleared the house. I could hear some whispering coming through the vents. Only snippets of conversation, like, "It's definitely her." "What are we going to do with the daughter." As they came up the stairs. I flipped, because I knew they were talking about me.

When they got up the stairs, we headed over to the front door I got another funny feeling as I opened the door. It was only then I heard a beeping and saw a timer going from 6 seconds. I knew exactly what was happening when I heard Agent DiNozzo scream run.

I ran like my life depended on it, because it did. At the last second I jumped and flattened myself to the grass as I heard a huge explosion and felt the blistering heat right next to me. I felt the heat die down a little and stood up. My house was on fire. My house had just exploded. It was like all of the memories of the place had just wiped themselves clean from me. Though nothing good had happened there so it gave me a little bit of weight off my chest.

After a few minutes of me waiting, the fire department arrived and so did another car of alleged federal agents. They told me to get into the car and someone would be driving me somewhere. I got into the car and so did Agent DiNozzo.

Eventually we pulled into a building labeled "NCIS". Agent DiNozzo had told me a little about the place, joking with a movie reference that I understood. I knew someone else who watched movies like I did.

Once I made my way out of the car, we walked into the building, where they took a fingerprint scan of me and gave me a visitor pass to the building. I got into a silver elevator and was taken to level 4. After the elevator doors had opened, we walked past a bunch of people working. They were all staring at me and whispering amongst each other. "Is she the one?" "It can't be." And other stuff along that lines.

I was directed into a conference room and took a seat. Agent DiNozzo handed me a glass of water as he sat down across the table. I decided to say something before my courage bailed on me. "Why do people keep talking about me?" I demanded.

"I'll get to that eventually. For now, I have some questions to ask you. By the way, you can call me Tony."

"Okay Tony, what do you want to know?" I replied.

"Is this your full complete profile?" He asked pulling out a file folder.

I looked it over, curiously, my hand drifted over to the spot where my parents' names were supposed to go. I knew my mother, however, I had never known who my father was. Sure enough, the blank next to father was empty.

I sighed, nodding to show that it was all there, even my birth name, Carmendy Anne. Though it was just Carmendy Anne, no last name. I never knew what mine was, and my mother would never tell me. He then pulled out another file folder, and I knew who this was going to be before it was even opened.

I read the name of the description sheet; Eliza Williamson; my mother. I knew this was bad, as she had been in legal trouble before. As soon as I told him that it was my mother, he told me what had happened.

"We have footage of your mother planning an attack on the US and I was wondering if there has been anything suspicious going on around you." He asked me.

My mind was instantly sparked by what had happened last week. Something I had tried so hard to forget and wipe from my memory. "Last weekend, she locked me into a chair and told me I was not allowed to leave. I was stuck in the dark basement for hours, and she would not let me out. Ever sense then she has been gone with her new friend."

"Can you identify him for me? Is this him?" He said flipping open another folder to show another familiar face while writing down things in a notebook.

"Yes." I told him.

He looked at me and stood up. "Well, I think that's all for now, I am going to ask that you go down to our forensic scientist so we can figure out who your father is. Trust me, you will love her. Hopefully your dad will be registered in the system." Tony told me as he clapped my back and took me back to the elevator.

I got down to a new level, and heard loud techno music blaring from a room down the hall. Tony was laughing to himself as he walked me into the room. My eyes widened, there in the room was the happiest Goth I had ever seen before. "Hey Abs" Tony shouted through the room and I heard the room get silent.

"What can I do for you DiNozzo?" She asked.

"I need you to do a paternity test on this girl. Hopefully her father is in the system." He answered.

"Okay! Sounds great. I can call you down when I finish.

Within a matter of minutes the lady, who I had learned was named Abby had taken a sample of my blood and entered it into the system. We waited for the results, but after a while it got relatively boring, so we walked into the other office and she explained some of her machines to me, none of which I understood.

After about a half hour we heard a "Bing" and Abby jumped up to check the computer, telling me to stay there. Hearing a test tube hit the ground, I looked over to see her with a look of complete shock on her face.

Before I could see what it was, she closed the tab and called up to the main part of the office, and told everyone to come down. I don't know who all she called, but the entire time she was whispering to herself. "This is not good, not good at all."

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