The crow and the sparrow

disclaimer: i do not own Damon or Bonnie or any other Vampire Diaries characters for that matter. they are all the property of L.J. Smith, I only own the poem

Never in his life has he felt such sorrow

Then at the death of this little sparrow.

Blood strewn between feathers of brown

Turned his black beak into a frown.

His ebony feathers shivered slightly

As he landed near the body lightly

And stared at the lovely carcass

On which the death and blood harassed

This little bird that I love

Gave into death's gentle shove

That never more shall be seen

Flying through the air in a coat of sheen

The dark shadow that is the crow

Shall never again see alive

His lovely little sparrow

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