FIRST POST! Well, I planned to post a Death Note fanfic first but laziness struck me and now my only copy of it is now gone…anyway, this is a short song/chant(?) I hurriedly composed during Music class. Since alchemy's currently stuck in my head, it's the first thing that came to my mind. Pattern is aabb ccdd efef, 7 syllables per line.



The Gate of Truth

Innocent boys, so naïve

Own bodies ready to give

With no mind to the taboo,

Go, without further ado

Oblivious to the danger,

At last, ready to wager

Aniki lost his hand

Lil' brother lost all at hand.

The Gate of truth he was led

Filled with white, caused him to sink

"Too much blood, blood that is red!"

"Oh poor Ed, what do you think?"


Anyone have any suggestion of a song's tune that would fit this? One suggested Marry Me by Emilie Autumn.