Hello peeps! This is my strange story so far. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE REVIEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know if you think it's good!
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Even before entering, he knew what the dragons were yearning for: fresh meat. He had no idea why he went into that dark and gloomy place; he hadn't even had a second doubting thought. All he knew was that he needed to enter that cave. It was as if some unknown force was pulling him inward.
When he entered the cave, his ears picked up strange sounds. He listened just as Daine, his teacher and the Wild Mage, had taught him to do. Soon he deciphered faint grunts, growls, and hard breathing coming from the dark depths of the caves many twists and turns. Taking a strand of his magic, he firmly tossed it out to the creatures that were making the noise. He felt it touch something and deftly followed his magic through his pitch black surroundings, all the while keeping his right hand on the wall for guidance, his left on the hilt of a long sword.
As he crept forward, he thought about the fight that had happened a week ago, between him and Ammalith. Recalling the result, he shuddered. It hadn't been right of her to go among the raiders, almost getting her head permanently severed, and then she wished to return, the next day, to the same camp where she might have met her death! But she hadn't listened to reason and had left in a fury. Now, with no word from her still, he was searching everywhere imaginable. This cave was part of the raiders hideout, and he wanted to be sure she wasn't in it.
His thoughts were immediately cut off as a flame shot by him, just inches from his body. If he had been just a step to the left, he'd have a huge burn covering the left side of his face. He yelped, but all sound was soon gone from him as he found himself staring into the eyes of a dragon about 15 yards away.
It was large, at least two times as tall as him and two times as wide, with green scales reflecting light from a glowing ball that hovered above the creature. The purple scales down his stomach were only faintly visible, blending in his the lavender outstretched wings that perfectly matched the eyes that were glaring maliciously at the young teenager that faced him. The boy knew this massive creature would not miss his target again.
He saw the dragon take a deep breath, but saw no more, for by then he was stumbling blindly toward the entrance, or at least where he hoped the entrance would be. Just as he thought his legs would give, he saw a light. He started to slow his pace, but felt his hand heat up as a flame shot around the corner. He felt his flesh melt. Flailing madly, he ran down the hill to the village bellow with renewed strength.
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So how do you like it? Please review it and be a nice little reader!
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Even before entering, he knew what the dragons were yearning for: fresh meat. He had no idea why he went into that dark and gloomy place; he hadn't even had a second doubting thought. All he knew was that he needed to enter that cave. It was as if some unknown force was pulling him inward.
When he entered the cave, his ears picked up strange sounds. He listened just as Daine, his teacher and the Wild Mage, had taught him to do. Soon he deciphered faint grunts, growls, and hard breathing coming from the dark depths of the caves many twists and turns. Taking a strand of his magic, he firmly tossed it out to the creatures that were making the noise. He felt it touch something and deftly followed his magic through his pitch black surroundings, all the while keeping his right hand on the wall for guidance, his left on the hilt of a long sword.
As he crept forward, he thought about the fight that had happened a week ago, between him and Ammalith. Recalling the result, he shuddered. It hadn't been right of her to go among the raiders, almost getting her head permanently severed, and then she wished to return, the next day, to the same camp where she might have met her death! But she hadn't listened to reason and had left in a fury. Now, with no word from her still, he was searching everywhere imaginable. This cave was part of the raiders hideout, and he wanted to be sure she wasn't in it.
His thoughts were immediately cut off as a flame shot by him, just inches from his body. If he had been just a step to the left, he'd have a huge burn covering the left side of his face. He yelped, but all sound was soon gone from him as he found himself staring into the eyes of a dragon about 15 yards away.
It was large, at least two times as tall as him and two times as wide, with green scales reflecting light from a glowing ball that hovered above the creature. The purple scales down his stomach were only faintly visible, blending in his the lavender outstretched wings that perfectly matched the eyes that were glaring maliciously at the young teenager that faced him. The boy knew this massive creature would not miss his target again.
He saw the dragon take a deep breath, but saw no more, for by then he was stumbling blindly toward the entrance, or at least where he hoped the entrance would be. Just as he thought his legs would give, he saw a light. He started to slow his pace, but felt his hand heat up as a flame shot around the corner. He felt his flesh melt. Flailing madly, he ran down the hill to the village bellow with renewed strength.
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So how do you like it? Please review it and be a nice little reader!
