I am obviously not Veronica Roth so I don't own the characters but I do own the plot. So yeah.


Tris P.O.V.

Hi. My name is Beatrice Prior (Though some call me Tris) and my whole life I have been raised in a world divided into five factions.

Abnegation - The Selfless

Amity - The Peaceful

Candor - The Honest

Dauntless - The Brave

Erudite - The Intelligent

I live in Abnegation where until the age of 16 I must live until The Aptitude Test and The Choosing Ceremony.

(The Aptitude Test - a yearly assessment taken by every 16 year old to decide what faction they belong in.)

(The Choosing Ceremony - a ceremonial day observed each year in which those who are sixteen years of age will choose one of the five factions.)

Today my brother, Caleb, and I get to take the test. We both head over to the hub and get ready for it. When they call my name I walk over to the door and see the name Tori on a little sign as I get pulled into the room. I lay down and Tori picks up a needle with yellow liquid in it.

Tori injects the yellow liquid into my arm and the whole world goes black


I wake up lying in a bed with a pink, blue, and green striped quilt. I look over to my right and see a white side table and a pink and white dotted clock with the time 6:29 on it. It ticks to 6:30 and an annoying, repetitive beep starts playing from it. A lady that looks a lot like my mom walks in the room.

"Morning Trisy." She says. "Christina will be picking you up at 7:15 for school. Get up."

"What's going on?" I ask

"Stop your crap and get ready." 'Mom' says.

She walks out of the room as I sit up. I walk over to the only other door in the room and open it. I look inside and see a bunch of girly looking clothes. I dig through all of the clothes until I find the least girly thing (Black Jeans, a White Cami, and Black Combat Boots).

I change from my tank and polar fleece pants pjs into the clothes and go down stairs to the kitchen. 'Mom' gives me a bowl of cereal and some toast.

"I'm heading off to work. Christina should be taking you home from school and Dad will be back from work a little after you come home. Okay? Love you." She says as she grabs her keys and heads outside.

"Um, okay." I reply as I look around the house. Something buzzes in the bag I grabbed. I pull out a phone and look at it:

Chris - Hey T! Be there in 5 mins. Xx

Reply - Ok. Xx

I text back as I finish my food. I continue to look around the house until I hear a car horn from outside. I grab my stuff and head out.


A/N- Hey! Hope you guys liked it and didn't feel like you wasted five minutes reading it. Feel free to review but try to be niceish. That is not even a word but whatever.

Xx