So this is my first fanfic, i do not own anything except for the idea, and I hope you enjoy it.
Ed, Al, and Roy where having a meeting in roy's office and for some reason winry was there too. Roy and ed where in the middle of a conversation (argument) when a black portal opened up. "what the where did that come from" Ed asked. After ed asked that a big giant hand came out and grabbed him. 'Help me somebody" said ed so Winry grabbed ed's hands and pulled Roy grabbed onto winry's waist to help and al grabbed onto Roy to help to but winry lost her grip on Ed's hands and his hands slipped out of her hands and the black hand pulled ed in to the portal and for some reason ed couldn't use his alchemy to get out and the portal closed and vanished leaving no trace of evidence that it had ever been there.
"Wait what happened where did Ed go?" Winry asked and just after she said that A bigger black portal appeared and more big Black hands appeared. One hand grabbed winry and she could not reach her wrench to defend herself with, 2 hands grabbed Al and for some reason he felt his strength leave him, and finally one big black hand got roy so fast that he did not have enough time to snap his fingers and he also felt his strength and his ability to use alchemy leave him as well. "What why can't I use my alchemy and why do I feel so weak?" Roy asked and after he asked that the portal closed and every one blacked out.
So I am going to need help for my next chapter or page because I am going to need a new name for Ed when he joins the Organization and his new name would be his first names letters switched around with an X added in, I already know what his weapon is going to be, his element is going to be metal, and I need help figuring out what his little description thingy is like Axel's description thingy in The Flurry Of Dancing Flames so any way I hope that you enjoyed it.
