Wow ! First ever story. Please be kind. I would've posted this sooner. But I misplaced my rough draft. (Stupid Becky always loosing things. "sigh")
Okay the other story I was going to write well… school started and zapped my inspiration. Here's what I want from you guys. I trust your opinions greatly. So here's the deal you review I write the more reviews the more I write and the less I play my new FF7 game. I would really like for reviews to contain only helpful criticism and/or comments. Please, as much as I'm afraid to ask this, if you feel like it telling me what you think of Yari. Yes even if you hate him. (Warn me if I ever slip out of character with any of them!) Now without further ado let the story begin.
Collision 1
Yari's P.o.v.
I had been calling their names for a long time. But I had known from the first call that I was alone. No matter how loud I screamed for them, they wouldn't hear. Yet somehow, saying their names gave me a small hope. That hope was all that kept me from breaking down.
I must have wondered in that darkness for hours. I was tired and I was slowly giving into my despair. When I considered shedding just one tear his words came to me again.
"Be strong."
I wonder if he knew that we would all be separated. Why had he let me go alone?
"Damn it!" I screamed at the top of my already aching lungs.
My sword was drawn from its sheath and jammed into what must have been the ground. I saw myself in the blades sapphire steel, and it made me sick. I looked at my pale hands instead. My whole life it had always ended like this. Whenever I finally trust someone we become separated.
"Why are you doing this?" I whispered, "Why did you leave me! Please don't do this. Not again…"
Even in this endless darkness the sword glowed with a brilliant light. I met the eyes of my reflection again. It stared back at me and for the first time in years there were tears running down his face. I watched them trickle down and then run off the cold steel; leaving behind blurry tails. I felt so alone, and I was. I hated being weak. Out of anger and pulled the sword free of the earth and sheathed it so it was out of my sight.
I didn't' seem to exist. This place of constant ebony darkness didn't seem to exist either. It was then I realized it. This place was somewhere between. I wasn't dead and I wasn't asleep. I just …was.
"Why?" It came out as a whisper. My lungs were hurting even more. I flopped onto my back and stared up at the dark sky. "Don't do this. Please, I don't want to be by myself. Not anymore." Another voice entered my memory.
I smiled, knowing it so well. "Even in the greatest darkness there will always be light."
My voice came out calmly, "As long as I have my light, I'll find my way. Either they'll find me or I'll find them."
I shut my eyes and thought of those I wished to see, if only once more.
"Just find me soon."
Light… Bright sunlight was filtered thorough my eyelids causing me to see blurry red. The sound of ocean waves and the smell of salt water filled my slowly awakening senses.
"Where am I now?"
I don't own any of these wonderful games/TV shows so I'm legally safe. But! Yari is mine! If you steal him there will be legal trouble! So hands off! Okay review! Review! pwetty pwese. If you have any requests or ideas for this or anything else feel free to speak up. Oh there's so much to tell. Each chapter is either told by one of the characters of me from an outsiders point of view (no Mary –sue! ) Yes this one was a bit short but that's because the second half sounded a little corny so it shall be rewritten in Study hall!
