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Thud Thud Thud

All Talise could feel was the pounding of her feet, the beats of her heart thudding against her chest, her mind swirling with so many thoughts that it felt like it might burst. The field was growing steadily darker, the sun's warmth fading in the west and the grass path disappearing before her eyes. Stopping for a moment, Talise looked to the sky. There were no stars to guide her, no sparkles in the sky. The sunny day that was just here had disappeared. Sunny. Her heart just thudded harder and harder against her chest. That name just stung to say again. Sunny, Sunny, Sunny over and over again. But it was all she could think about.

Thud Thud Thud

Talise collapsed on to the wet grass. It was now officially dark. The sky had turned a deep midnight blue with cloud rolling ominously ahead, the grass a slick and cold seat beneath her shins from the dew, the wind picking up around her. It would rain soon, she knew it but didn't give a damn. She waited as her hair now hung in think wet strips around her head, the cool water washing away the bitter saltiness from her eyes, and the pelting of drops on her back. Rain was cleansing, fresh, renewing, but all she felt was cold, darkness, and solitude. Everything had gone wrong, everything.

Ah but love is not definite. Its a mystery for one to solve, the little voice on her head said quietly, there is no definite path, there are only clues, hint, and those who are willing to look and see what they mean. Dig and search for what you know.

Taking a breath she closed her eyes and looked back, look back on what everything meant. To herself, Will, Sarah, Optimus, and Sunstreaker.

Thud Thud Thud

Talise means beautiful water in native american

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