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So Hi guys!
Long time no see! Before, I deleted because I thought no liked it really... SO YEAH.. I'm re-typing it to continue it! So I wanted to thankkeelykelly for commenting on this book ! I saw what you meant after re-reading it. And that it really was SOOO CONFUSING! Also for a shout out, Dulaman terrior, Thanks for telling me to continue the book! And also I'd like to comment on the Guest that have reviewed on the book. Look. I'm still only in 7th grade and I'm still learning paragraphs... Plus when I wrote the first copy, it was the beginning of the year for me and it's still really hard for me to write paragraphs... SO YEAH JUST ACCEPT IT! But anyway, since I practiced writing books, I don't know if I will publish, I think I'll fix it. (I also suck at spelling certain words. SO YEAH IF I HAVE A MISPELLED WORD SORRY!) I also corrected some unknown words...If you have questions on it, you can PM me for a shout out and ask the question or you can review too.
Later and READ ON!
Libby
Chapter 1
Bayport
Nancy Drew and her two best friends, Bess Marvin, who was a little on the chubby side, but was an in between on weight, with blonde hair. George Fayne, who was cousins with Bess and was best friends with Nancy, was athlete slim and had black short hair. The trio was heading to Bayport to see Nancy's father, Carson Drew, for a volunteer case. Driving through Bayport, the top of their red Jeep opened with the sea salt smelling air and beautiful sunshine coming through. Nancy's blondish-red curls blowing everywhere. They headed down the winding road, when two motorcycles cruised passed them, going the other way. "Ahh. I sooo wish we weren't here on a case Nancy." said Bess in the back of the Jeep. Nancy laughed and said "Me too Bess, me too." George was busy texting her mom about how many days they were staying, telling her not worry if she got sun- burnt (which didn't look like she was going to get burnt at all, rather getting kidnapped, chased, followed and nearly getting killed, which Nancy was notorious for having that kind of Karma around her some how.) When Nancy and Bess won the challenge to get George off her phone, they turned up the radio and sang along to songs.
Frank and Joe Hardy cruised on their motorcycles on the long road that lead to and from town to a place their mom requested to go get food to eat for lunch. Frank was the oldest with deep dark- brown black hair and kind of a build a normal guy his age should and would have. While Joe, the youngest Hardy brother, had blonde hair that matched the sun and had a build that a normal person would WANT to have. They passed many cars, including a red Jeep, which many people in Bayport didn't want or have Jeeps. Most tourist rented them so they could have a ride around town. When they finally got there, Frank and Joe looked at the sign. "Shrimp Gulf Outpost." was weird name since it wasn't even close the beach and there were no outposts for seafood in Bayport. They walked into a place that looked like "Olive Garden" seafood style. "Welcome to Shrimp Gulf Outpost. Table for two?" asked the waitress. "Yes." Frank answered. Frank, knowing his brother, Joe would have said something like "Sure. It it's a table for you and me." if Frank hadn't answered. Frank felt half the time bad for the pretty girls Joe put his eyes on. Sometimes even asked them out. They followed the waitress into the main dinning area to a window table, that was a booth for two. The waitress took their orders on drinks and went to go get them. The two Hardy boys made small talk when the waitress she came back, they ordered. "I'll have the fried fish, with tartar sauce and a salad on the side, please." said Frank. " I'll have the crawfish with potatoes and corn on the cob." Joe said. The waitress nodded and walked off with their order. Once they were alone again, "So, who is this guy dad's having over for a case?" Joe asked. "Carson Drew." answered Frank. They were talking about the new case the brother's father, Fenton Hardy, had stepped on. Mr. Hardy was bringing in a professional lawyer and his detective kid. Anyway, Bayport was having some Ghost Ship appear in the water around midnight and leave around 4 in the morning, leaving a trail of murders and robberies. "Dad mentioned the kid is coming in today. Supposedly we'd known her since I was like... 2 and you were like,.. 3" said Joe. "Here's your crawfish and here's your fried fish." said the waitress. "So how do you know it's a girl?" asked Frank, while he was eating. "Don't know. Just having a gut feeling about it being a girl." said Joe, mouth full of corn on the cob. They finished their lunch. Ordered some food for their dad, mom, their dad's guests and their dad's sister who the called Aunt Gertrude. Then they left.
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Libby
SO I started this book, and I'm sooo HAPPY! Thanks for pushing me to continue. I've got some fresh ideas for this book, from the last copy!
Later AND READ ON
Libby!
