AN/ okay this is my first shot at free verse. I really just wanted to try it out. Could ya tell me how I did? =]

You gave up tryingtrying

Hard. Oh, so (very) H A R D

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He can't take anymore away (what's left?)

He already has it A L L

You say "NO"

But they hear

Yesyesyes

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He showed up

Out of theb l u e

{ So much like his hairhairhair}

Your s m i l eholds strong

But inside (That's what counts rightrightright?)

She's shattered,

[A milliont i m e s]

He watches, stares

At her broken b e a u t y

I n n o c e n t l y

S-W-E-E-T-L-Y

Adoringly

They m e e t

Saying everything

In one thing

One a c t i o n

One

K

I

S

S

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They aren't p-e-r-f-e-c-t

No they [[just]] are

Their just P e o p l e

Together

F o r e v e r

In

L

O

V

E