AN/ Well this is supposed to be like free-verse poetry, and well I'm not too good with poetry, please tell me what you thought! Don't hold back!


Amor Servus

It hurts to see some one you love more than your own life,

In some one else's arms.

The pain ripped and tore into his heart,

his soul,

Until he felt he could no longer bear the pain.

The pain was so great,

He felt he should drop dead

That very moment.

Though

Still he stayed,

His heart being eaten away from the inside.

He thought that if they met in different circumstances,

Momomiya Ichigo

Would belong to him.

He wished he could

Go back

Save himself some pain,

And resist his urge to kiss

The cute Mew Mew

Resist his urge to toy with her

He couldn't though,

He could only try and

Subdue the pain