Hi everyone. This is my first ever fanfic so I was hoping that you could maybe tell me if my storyline is good enough.

The Storyline:

Roxy and Sean are behind the bar, Stacey comes in with Danielle and Ronnie. Danielle and Ronnie go to R&R to sort out business plans. Stacey orders a coke and Sean realises that something is up and he asks. She snaps at him and Roxy takes her upstairs and Stacey breaks down in tears. Roxy asks what's wrong and Stacey replies that she's pregnant but doesn't know who the daddy is.

So can you please let me know if it would be a good storyline to do or if it would need changing around a bit? Thanks.