Words: Bad Grammar and too many conjunctions.
Timeline
Haruno Sakura. It was night and she was walking by herself home on the cobblestone road. Her footsteps could only be heard and nothing else. She took the long way thinking of what surprise, Sensei Kakashi was giving the next day. She was only a few minutes away home and the stars that illuminated the sky dwindled.
Silently was something with speed behind. It hid in the shadows and was stalking its pray. As Sakura walked more the dark figure followed. Sakura never noticed due to the fact that her absent-minded mind was in interest of something else.
She stopped. Sakura noticed something wrong something that she knew but could not name. Her body was shaking. Then her eyes widened and would not figure what would happen until she collapsed. Her view of the sky darkened………… and the figure disappeared.
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Flashback
'Why are you here alone? " asked a boy.
"Why do you talk to me?" said a young depressed Sakura.
"Because when a person is alone………."
End of flashback
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Tension was in Sakura eye. Birds were chirping which meant it was morning. Her head was sore and Sakura was thinking a bad dream just happened. Wrong… Her body felt like she slept on rock but the surface felt like soft green grass. The wind flew in and an essence of spirit went in the setting. Sakura grunted not wanting to open her eyes but rest……
Tension again went Sakura eye. But she didn't want to get up.
"Why don't wake up already you've been sleeping ever since I came here" said a voice of a man but yet a boy.
Sakura's eye opened trying to focus the blurry figure. As the vision went to focus she saw two dark eyes staring at her. Sasuke?! No, it was someone else. But as Sakura was trying to figure out who and what this person was, a hand was shown at a glance of her vision.
She grabbed the hand and she was pulled off the ground. After that they just stared at one another. Sakura profiled him in her mind. He looked about her age and was not a foreigner due to his forehead protector. She sensed his charka level surpassed her own and could tell his strength was greater Kakashi's.
"I never seen you here before but you wear the fore head protector of the Leaf." quietly said the boy
"Neither have I. You look familiar though and you can let go of my hand now," answered back Sakura.
"Whatever" he said as he shook her hand off his. He then turned his back on her and started to leave.
'Wow what a friendly person' thought Sakura sarcastically. Then she noticed something on the boys back it was a symbol. A symbol she recognized that stands for the Uchiha Clan. It couldn't be Sasuke but could it be the brother he must kill. What to do?! She could be hero of the village by capturing him. And maybe Sasuke will like her even more. She had no choice she saw a rock on the ground. She picked it up and aimed it his head. He then collapsed and she ran towards him. She could see he was knocked out but only for a little while. Then she thought, 'Isn't Sasuke's brother supposed to look older he looks about my age.' Did she make a mistake? No she knew lots of older people that looked like pre teens
Inner Sakura: 'I better stop thinking and start telling the villagers!
She was close to her house so she thought she should tell her mother first. So she ran and something startled her as she passed a little girl.
Inner Sakura:?
It was Ino. But a nine year old Ino! And then she heard a little girl yelling at a small child.
"Naruto you get back here! You'll pay for what you did to my fluffy!" cried a girl holding a rainbow colored cat.
Inner Sakura:???
'Am I dreaming of my childhood.' thought Sakura. She pinched herself and she didn't wake up this wasn't a dream. Then she heard some young village girls talking.
"Did you hear some girl hit Itachi unconscious with a rock."
"What!?"
"Yeah I say we find the girl and give her beating and then maybe Itachi willl ask me on a date"
"Why you?"
"Because I'm the one who thought of the plan"
"Anyone can make up that plan…"
The crowd of girls soon got in big argument and Sakura thought How come the villagers don't hate Itachi? Wasn't he the one that killed off the Uchiha clan?
Then a girl with brown hair yelled at the so-called Itachi fan club that a pink girl about Itachi's age 13 was the one who knocked him out. Then all their heads turned and stared at Sakura.
'Uh-oh' she thought.
"Get her!" yell the brown hair girl pointing at Sakura.
They soon ran after Sakura and she thought it was a good idea to focus her charka at feet right now.
…….
10 minutes later
"Can you find her?"
"No! she was too fast for us"
"Well she ran away which means she really must be the one that hit Itachi."
Sakura was right now up a tree right now listening to the Itachi fans. They soon left and thought 'I'm not at my normal time right now. The obsessed fans, the young rivals, she must of traveled back in time about 4 years!
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My story sucks! I know and it has really bad grammar I'm too lazy to check! Flames are welcomed! Bye!