REVISED: 16th NOVEMBER 2016.
BY: Namikazeminato.7799(yeah thats my new name in place of kakashihatake.7799)
DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything. AH it's so troublesome.
A/N: This is my first fanfiction so please take it easy on me guys. I am an active member of this site for nearly 1 year and on my way to become an author so please please please support me.
Also I am a big fan of naruino pairing so either this will be a naruino or a naruharem.
So enjoy!
CHAPTER 1
Getting an invincible gift
It was an exhausting morning for our hero because jiraiya was busy with his so called 'research' and Naruto was training alone in outer region of a forest. It was second week of his training trip with jiraiya and he was working hard to become stronger so that he can return and protect his precious people in konoha.
It was true that he succeeded in bring the traitorous uchiha back to the village (we all know who this traitor is right?) after a long fight at the valley of the end which resulted in a very exhausted Naruto and a half dead Sasuke, the Uchiha prodigy.
Now sasuke was a chunnin and was always under ANBU sight. Tsunade never tried to stop Naruto as she knew that this trip was very important for the future of both Naruto and konohagakure no sato.
Now, it was clear that Naruto was overexerting himself as sweat was clearly visible on his forehead and his muscles were twitching under the pressure of the nine tails chakra cloak. Naruto was trying to control third tailed state of demon fox's cloak and had nearly completed it.
Suddenly that damn fox toke over. his muscles started to scream under the tremendous strain and his skin started to peel, resulting in his blood to flow in the cloak and turn it from bright red to crimson in colour.
his eyes that were red with black slits before now turned pure white and even his fangs and claw turned blood red. a disturbance occurred at the end of his spine and slowly but surely another tail started to grow and join the three already present.
he enter fourth tailed state and lost control over his body. soon Naruto found himself in the sewer of his subconscious mind where the cage of kyubi was situated. Naruto got angry on seeing kyubi grinning like a madman inside cage.
having enough of the stupid fox he became more furious and said "Oi, you damn fox, what are you grinning at? Just give me the control of my body back and I will not hurt you".
Kyubi roared and said" YOU DAMN FOOL,WHO ARE YOU MORTAL TO TALK TO ME LIKE THAT, THE GREAT KYUBI NO KITSUNE?" .
Naruto said fuming" I am your jailer DUMB ASS FOX."
"Like you can even touch me insect, hahahahaha, I can crush you with just a claw of mine and you will start screaming for mercy due to the pain."Kyubi said.
"oh yeah, then why don't you try killing me now ? Let's see how you kill me when I am on this side of the seal baka fox".
"ENOUGH, NOW you know why you are still alive kit, just because if you die I die does not mean I cannot harm you and you can't even dare to cross this cage bars"
"He cannot cross the cage bars but I can. Right kurama?" a voice came from behind Naruto. Naruto turned around surprised, unconsciously stumbling back to the kyubi's cage. on realising where he was and what the fox could do to him he look in fear at kyubi's face.
kyubi was looking in the direction of the misterious figure with narrowed eyes. what kyubi did next surprised even naruto as it used one of its tails and pulled Naruto in the middle of its front paws. the tail then wrapped around Naruto in a protective manner.
from the dark side of the mindscape, an old man with magantas all over his clothing's stepped out of the dark, smiling .Kyubi's eyes widened and he whispered to himself
" s-s-sage" this was noticed by Naruto and noticing the stutter in kyubi's voice he asked the old man
" hi old man, you seem to have quiet an effect on this baka of a fox. Why is it stuttering in front of you? And who are you? a-and how did you get here in my mind?a-a-and…..?".
" calm down Naruto, my boy. you can ask all of your questions one by one. There is no need to ask all of them in one breath. after all none of us is in a hurry. right? " the Old man said smiling at Naruto.
"O-Okay so first thing first, who are you?"Asked Naruto.
"have you ever heard about the sage of six paths, father of all shinobi, jutsus and of course bijjus?" asked the old man.
"I have but I don't know much as I never paid much attention to history or theory lectures in academy"answered Naruto a bit confused and ashamed to his confession.
"well I am that sage. the sage of the six paths, the great sennin of all times and also father of kurama, or as you call him kyubi".Naruto turned his at kyubi and started grinning at the greatest bijju.
finally he said" I found your father kyubi! Now I will make him punish you for your behaviour towards me and konoha".
The sennin laughed a little while kyubi just stared at Naruto, ready to kill him just by staring.
"Now now, I am here to give you a gift, something from me on your fourteenth birthday little Naruto" said the sennin.
Now Naruto remembered that today was 10th October, his fourteenth birthday.
He quickly asked "what is this gift? please tell me what is it? it is the first gift i will ever get on my birthday".
the Sennin said "first, I am here because your entered fourth tailed state of your bijju cloak and yes there is a gift for you. I have been watching you for sometime. your battle at the valley of end was really breathtaking. so I decided to give you my eyes Naruto."
now Naruto was disgusted. "i don't want your eyes. i have mine and i don't want to make someone blind because of me"
the sage chuckled and said" no not like that. i will give YOUR EYES the power of MINE. understood? now listen closely young one as it will be useful in he future when you use my eyes."
Naruto immediately sat down and unconsciously pulled kyubi's tail around him for warmth, much to the irritation of the said bijju.
"It is called eternal rinnegan, I used it in making all nine bijjus and distributing the power of the jyubi. it takes a lot of users chakra to remain active and leaves the user unconscious for at least a week But you already have kurama inside of you, this limitation will not act on you."
now Naruto was curious as well as excited. the Sennin continued " Naruto, these eyes will give you immense power and you will be able to learn every jutsu just by seeing it once, even bloodline jutsus and doujutsus like byakugan and sharingan better known as the kekkei genkai. All you need to do will be to say the jutsu's or doujutsu's name and you will have it or will be able to perform it with in a heartbeat".
Naruto asked" are there any side effects because I hate hospital" he said pouting. The sage said" no there is no side effect of this doujutsu and I will be training you in your mindscape to control it easily when you will be sleeping as you body will be resting and you will be training here with me.
Also I am giving your these scrolls , they contain jutsus and doujutsus I have seen until now .you can read them here in your mindscape and kurama will help you with them. Right kurama ? "
"h-hai father" was the reply of kyubi from behind. the kyubi was nodding nonstop as he became more and more excited. the Sennin then placed his both hands on Naruto's shoulders and made an eye contact with him and said "OK Naruto, this will hurt a lot but the pain is worth it. the power that comes with it is beyond your wildest dream , so ready?"
when Naruto hesitantly nodded, the sage started pouring his chakra in Naruto's eyes. Naruto started screaming with all his might and tried to cry because of pain but his tears betrayed him as his eyes were not under his control. Finally his body gave up and he fainted in sage's arms.
AFTER SOMETIME
"argh" was the first thing Naruto muttered after he gained his consciousness. "so you are finally awake huh? I thought I overdid it when you fainted" came the sennin's voice from behind him.
Naruto turned to face the sage and asked "is it done?". The sennin simply nodded and said that "you're travelling partner is approaching, tell him everything and only those who you trust. Ask him to teach you sage art and tell that I said that you are ready for it as well as for the secret of your heritage as well."
/There you are the first chapter is up. I know this is a small chapter but as I said in the starting A/N, this is my very first fanfic so that means this is my very first chapter as well. Also I will Update twice a month so wait OK? I SAID OK? , Review and I am open for advice and please tell me if you want something in the future chapters. Ja ne!
