Star wars KOTOR Rebirth version.

Darth Revan dark lord of the Sith empire stood at the head of the command bridge watching through the duraglass windows as his fleet engaged the republic. Revan watched as one of the republic capital ships bursts into flames and a few minutes later exploded he felt a hint of sadness for the deaths he could feel through the force yet he wouldn't let that stop him in his quest, he needed the planet below to join his cause.

During the mandalorian wars he like the Jedi council had always thought there was more to the mandalorians simply deciding to invade the republic up until he had disobeyed the council the republic was losing the war against the mandalorians hundreds of thousands either died or became slaves to mandalore and his quest for galactic domination.

He and many of his fellow Jedi spent months training and preparing in secret learning what they could from the vast knowledge stored in the Jedi archives he in particular spent many months learning all he could about lightsaber combat and eventually created his own hybrid form that took the best of each of the Jedi combat forms and combined them. His Jedi teacher at the time Kreia helped him when she could providing old and forgotten knowledge.

Once he and his fellow Jedi were ready they contacted various admirals in the republics army to arrange transport and left the Jedi behind to the disgust of the Jedi council and many of their fellow Jedi, he had gone from a champion of the Jedi to a rebel within mere hours.

Revan was considered to be a tactical genius as well as a Jedi that was extremely strong in the force, he spent months going from Jedi masters learning each skills they could teach before moving on to the next and thanks to that was considered to be an extremely talented lightsaber combatant beating some of the older and wiser Jedi weapon masters with ease.

His master Kreia had often said that staring at him was like looking into the heart of the force itself that his destiny was one that would shape the very foundations of the galaxy itself. The moment he was given control of the republics army after a month of disagreement in the republics senate the war turned in republics favour, he left worlds that lacked the materials the mandalorians needed utterly defenceless while fortifying worlds that were rich in materials mandalore and his army needed.

He and his best friend Alek often found themselves fighting on the ground with the republics forces fighting through the muck and death around them to secure a victory in their favour, it was only as he personally fought mandalore the ultimate over the planet Malachor V that mandalore revealed the truth to him, mandalore had been tricked into attacking the republic by a very old and dangerous enemy one that the galaxy hadn't seen in over a thousand years. Mandalore had said they were hiding in the unknown regions of space waiting for the time where the republic would be weak so they could conquer the core worlds with ease and destroy the republic with little effort.

Revan had spent weeks after the final battle arguing the senate over this hidden threat but thanks to the Jedi council and there manipulations he was dismissed and told time and time again that the mandalorians were the threat, again it took him and the part of the army he commanded to disobeyed the orders of the supreme chancellor and venture into the unknown regions of space in search of this hidden enemy.

What he found there was much worse and terrible than anything he ever imagined millions of true Sith constantly training and preparing thousands of ships under construction and an emperor that was the very definition of evil, he could vaguely remember battling through the hordes to reach the emperor only for the man if he could be called that to defeat him with but a flick of his wrist.

What happened next was months of torture and mind manipulation that forced him to embrace the dark side to prove his loyalty to his new master he murdered hundreds of slaves and became a slave to the darkness, he and Malak as Alek preferred to be called had now become Sith Lords, he and Malak were sent to find an artefact that would aid the capture of the core worlds and expand the power of the emperor.

During his search Revan was able to slowly fight the darkness within him and find the remains of his army that on his order had been in hiding he saw that the republic were weak and the only way they would be able to stand a chance against the emperor and his legions of Sith was to make the republic strong, once he found the star forge he managed to activate the star forge with no ill effects although this had taken almost a year, he started to create an army one that would serve the republic and help defend the worlds the republic could not.

This again had not turned out how he expected as he started to gather worlds not under republic law to his cause the Jedi council declared him a Sith lord and rallied the republic against him making his cause that much harder it didn't take long for him to see that the republic needed to die it had spent thousands of years ruling the galaxy and had become stagnant with various senate representatives blackmailing themselves into positions of power and abusing their power for their own gain.

Revan had spent most of his life as a Jedi and some time as a slave to the dark side decided to take a gamble he would become a Sith Lord and would make the galaxy strong even if he had to destroy the republic to achieve this, he shook his head slightly and refocused on the battle raging outside it seemed the republic had decided to cut its loses and had ordered a retreat.

Revan turned his masked face slightly "Admiral." He called and only had to wait a few seconds before an old man in his late fifties with greying hair came rushing forward and bowed before him.

"Yes my lord?"

Revan turned back to look at the ships retreating "Allow the republic to leave and lick their wounds, contact our troops on the ground and get a report immediately." He unfolded his arms and flicked his wrist dismissing the admiral as he looked back out at his fleet that orbited the planet below.

He stood watching his fleet position itself into a more defensive position around the planet, it wasn't long before his admiral returned and after bowing offered him a data pad which he took without looking at the admiral and glanced through his mask at the glowing blue screen.

Thanks to his personally picked commanders the planet was now his it would take some time for him to remove the present government and replace it with one that answered to him and him alone but he wasn't overly troubled with this "Admiral send word to our troops each will be heavily reworded for this achievement." He gave the datapad back to the waiting admiral before he turned and walked out the command centre to his personal quarters.

A few minutes later he found himself in his quarters after walking through a small reception area he found himself in a large room one side of the room was a luxury bed covered in expensive silk just off to the side of the bed was his bathroom with sonic shower, the other side of the room looked out at the stars and the floor was covered in simple grey cushions.

After lowering his hood and removing his mask he placed it on an armour stand that was near his bed and walked to his mediation area and lowered himself onto his knees taking a few deep breaths he let the force wash over him and entered a mediation trance.


so this is my new story not sure when I will next update it for now just let me know what you all think.